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Deck of Cards


It's all comin' up aces

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I hopped the net when he wasn’t looking. “It wasn’t that funny,” I muttered to myself as I extended a hoof. He took it without a fuss, fighting little giggles as he got to his hooves. “It wasn’t that funny, Thunder.” I repeated lamely. My heart melted a little at the goofy grin that made his eyes shine. Curse him.

That's pretty gay <3

Enclave fraternization doctrine allowed for interpersonal relationships with pegasi above and below your rank with a disallowance between an officer and enlisted. Should fraternization occur outside the selected boundaries, the blame, and therefore consequences, would fall to the pony of a higher rank. Which was total bullshit. I was a captain in a completely different unit and Thunder was a colonel. A single. Damned. Rank. Separated us from the acceptable limits.

Ok I have to wonder what happens if two ponies are dating who are just at the edge of the rank limit, if one of them is promoted are they expected to split up?

But since those limits existed, it was a point of contention and stress for Thunder. Plenty of pegasi disobeyed the doctrine, and the Enclave didn’t care . As long as you weren’t some three star general plowing some grunt’s plot they did buck all! Thunder believed that if anypony found out he was with a captain the stars would explode and the clouds would evaporate, especially a Featherwing. End of the world for him. Which it wasn’t, duh , but he claimed because he was young and his superiors disapproved of his age (he was 23 with top academic marks, it was a wonder he didn’t rank higher), they were all gunning for some dirt to throw on his sexy, shiny black coat.

Oh, no that kinda explains it nevermind

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I'm so glad you enjoy it! I got another chapter in the works!

Luvvit
CH2 - The section with Ace's mom has some very good characterization. Can't wait for the next chapter! It's gonna be such a sweet release.

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