Well.... This is an interesting way to start a chapter.... I like it.
I'll be tracking this

This seems... Awkward?

As he pulled into the parking lot at the apartments, he was met by an increasingly common sight in his city. It was a small pony with a bright yellow coat with pink mane and tail, sitting in the grass drinking from a teaglass as she watched the sunset. She looked rather cute with her tail coiled around her and chest fluff swaying a bit in the breeze, but he had to remind himself that these were sentient creatures so he probably shouldn’t just go up and pat one like it was a poodle.

I believe it's sapient, not sentient. Many people get this wrong. Sapience indicates a higher level of intelligence and an ability to think. Sentience is simply being able to feel emotions and percieve things. I'm not an etymologist though, so don't quote me.

Part of me feels sorry for this mare.
The other part of me thinks she needs a lesson in boundaries.

this mare sounds like a thot to me, and aggressively so if she's going to such length to get some of the d.

I know from the description he eventually does the deed, but I don't think I'd have sex with anyone that was that pushy for it.

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Correct.

Dogs and cats are sentient.

Humans are sentient and sapient.

“Sex is natural! So we don’t mind if each other does it with friends or even strangers.”

Banana, you can't keep making the naturalistic fallacy like that.

Couldn’t stop myself from imagining this was George from Seinfeld

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That would make this unfairly hilarious.

Stories always gotta be like, “no, I obviously won’t have sex with the highly sexy and willing pony” even though almost everyone would. I just wish writers would find actual reasons