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SpoonfedArt
Small steps. Commissions are closed for the moment. Just working through my queue.
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Nice.
Spicy~
awesome I hope theres more (no rush).
This came out pretty amazing
Huzzah you arn't dead.
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Thank y'all!
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There might be some more... stuff coming soon.
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Don't worry guys, if I die I'll tell you!
(Sate, Sate, Sate,)
Let's see, the fic promised a lot with the summary you made, and not for less, because you, like the very, very few writers that I follow who like to write Futa, I hoped you would do something new and what a pleasant way to start. with a Futa fic from Tempest Shadow. Thank you.
Going to history in general, I must say that I had already seen the scoop, I felt something like another fic that has almost. almost the same beginning as yours, however we are not going to focus on that for now this is about you and your story.
The beginning was pleasant, you described what was necessary and not beyond what you should have, which I appreciate very much, since my English is still in practice. XD. But I must say that you left for the best moment the part that many of us expected and that Tempest revealed what he was "hiding" since he was not really doing it.
Although I must say that the insults and degradation is not something that I like very much, I must say that in some cases I can tolerate it when the right situation occurs and this, no matter how forced I have felt it, remains well. (It is also simple written pornography, we should not be picky either)
But it's great how everything develops slowly and above all tempting Twilight more than anything so that she dares to go further, which I really liked.
The sexual scene, I liked it a lot, you certainly have your own characteristic touch when writing heroticism that immediately identifies you. and that is very much appreciated, as it gives personality to your story.
A tremendous job, my good friend.
It is a relief that you are still alive, because with so much inactivity on your part I began to worry about you, how good that you are still writing for all of us, and again thank you for giving us a story like this.
Good storys
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Thank you for writing out your thoughts on the story! I've enjoyed your overview.
There are some elements of the story that I could've done differently, of course, but I wrote it the way I liked it, and I'm happy that you've appreciated it for what it is.
I really need more Twilight getting absolutely dominated smut.
What if during that she cast a spell silently into Tempest?
Tempest is doing this extremely well. When trying to make a prideful individual into a slave it's far better to take advantage of their ego rather than try to overpower it. Make them feel proud to be worthy of you. Take advantage of who they are.
I do kinda wish you had played that up more. That a mare like Twilight needs someone truly powerful to make her bend and put her in her place.
Again, I would have liked an epilogue of some kind.
I'd love to see a sequel to this. I can also totally see this being roleplay similar to your other story with Luna. It's rare to see good Twilight/Tempest fics like this, keep up the good work!
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Thank you! There was actually an idea where this becomes a kind of roleplay after Tempest is defeated. She goes on to 'study friendship' under Twilight's tutelage, but since Twilight has already gotten addicted to Tempest's cock it quickly devolves into Tempest mercilessly domming and railing Twilight under the flimsy pretense of developing their friendship.
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I'm amused that it could go both ways. Is it flimsy because she's brainwashed or is it flimsy because they're both coming up with excuses? ;) It could be consensual as with the Nightmare Moon fic or dubious consent addiction as you described. I'm amused at the idea of it being a consensual thing, and they keep coming up with lame excuses for why they keep disappearing and/or locking up the castle. The dubious consent one could also work, especially if it's in this style. Either way works great, as you write this so well. I'm surprised there's not more content like this on the site, especially with Twilight and Tempest. I'd love to see more!
Noice~! I'd like to see this continued, such as having Tempest capture the rest of the Mane 6 and breaking them, usually in an ironic manner.
Rarity wearing fetishized outfits, such as a sexy maid or a beautiful, but highly revealing dress, as well as sexual jewelry, such as nipple and clit piercings.
Dash and Jack are physically outdone, such as Tempest giving them the opportunity to go free if they can beat her in a fight.
Fluttershy has to wear animal parts, such as buttplug-tails and animal ears, getting 'rewarded' when she acts like the animal in question.
Pinkie is used as a 'human' table, with snacks and treats on her stomach/breasts, usually being dipped in her cunt. Or being told that her friends can go free if she can win 'certain' games.