Gazing

Sunny and Izzy look at some stars.

Written for the Quills and Sofa's Nov 18 Speedwrite, where the prompt was "Stargazing with Friends."

Audio reading by StraightToThePointStudio here!

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Fillyfoolish

Fillyfoolish #1 · Nov 20th, 2021 · 10 · 3 ·

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa they're so cute and gay and beautiful and gay and happy and gay and lesbian and gaaay!!

I wish i could uphoof multiple times

thank you for enriching my life with this

n3k1dsk1llz

n3k1dsk1llz #2 · Nov 20th, 2021 · 3 · ·

slow clap
rises to feet
clap slowly gains speed and volume

This was adorably cute. A nice little vignette of two hearts realizing their connection.

Paradox_Az

Paradox_Az #3 · Nov 20th, 2021 · 2 · ·

That's the kind of fluffy that I enjoy reading about. Especially after... well, not every story end on such happy notes.
And when it's written this good (both in the character's respect sense and the writing proper), well... it's just good. So good

Axolotl222

Axolotl222 #4 · Nov 20th, 2021 · 8 · ·

“I think she’s like Applejack, mixed with Twilight.”

I knew I couldn't be the only one who thought that! Thank you!

In all seriousness though, that was absolutely adorable. Okay, maybe I'm biased because I'm a sucker for stargazing scenes, but still.

AuroraDawn

AuroraDawn #5 · Nov 20th, 2021 · 10 · ·

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She wasn’t happy lying to her citizens, even if it was for their own good. Honesty mattered more to her than loyalty to her family.

Good character. And thanks!

Roxylalolcat

Roxylalolcat #6 · Nov 20th, 2021 · 4 · ·

Very cute!

Mica

Mica #7 · Nov 21st, 2021 · 10 · ·

“So what’s that make you then? Twilight? Fluttershy?”
Sunny stared into Izzy’s eyes for a long moment before kissing her one more time.
“Happy,” she answered, nestling into Izzy’s shoulder.

What a cute and witty ending line that ties everything together.

ArDee

ArDee #8 · Nov 21st, 2021 · 2 · ·

So good! >3<

Kaidan

Kaidan #9 · Nov 21st, 2021 · 2 · ·

You've mastered grimdark and romance, can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Majin Syeekoh

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Majin Syeekoh #10 · Nov 21st, 2021 · 3 · ·

This is the first G5 story I’ve read for pleasure.

And what a pleasure it was. They’re so comfy together.

Olden Bronie

Olden Bronie #11 · Nov 21st, 2021 · 4 · ·

Very cute and sweet! I love Sunny and Izzy together and you wrote them wonderfully!

Resu

Resu #12 · Nov 21st, 2021 · 3 · ·

Romance is't my thing.

Then why did I like it so much?

StraightToThePointStudio

StraightToThePointStudio #13 · Nov 21st, 2021 · 5 · ·

Sweetness and adorableness at its finest! My gosh you did such an amazing job with making this fic feel so lovely! Hope ya didn't mind, but a friend and I couldn't help ourselves with making a reading of this fabulous fic of yours!

Audio Linky!: https://youtu.be/i-Szuh2F8P0

(I don't mean to offend anyone with this comment in any way!)

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