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Zemez


Been a few years, as it seems my interest is staying for now, I'll stick around. I've been writing for almost ten years now, with a specialty in Adventure/thriller.

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1049 After the Sisters, Twilight, now elevated to Queen of Harmony after the nations united through friendship came together in a world government. Soon, the world will achieve sustainable space travel, and Twilight's job is to see her Friendship ambassador, and her little brother Spike, on a mission of friendship through the stars... But everything she passes by reminds her how long it's been since that first day in Ponyville...


(This was written for Bicyclette's Sci-fi Contest.)

(Twilight in image made by Silentmatten)

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A definite alternate future than what G5 shows us.

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Interestingly. I actually used my mixed feeling about G5 and put them into this. Twilights situation very much parallels the feelings I have.

Ah, the feels of moving, whether to a new place or just moving on ... :rainbowdetermined2:

The two of them suited up and entered the starship via a teleportation spell that was entirely supplied energy by the ship. This did mean that a unicorn or another creature capable of outward magic expression was needed to connect to the spell, however. The entire crew was waiting in the cargo area, all of the supplies and crates packed to the edge of the walls to make room. She looked over all of the creatures, thirty changelings, two dragons, four Kirins, eight Abyssinians, a dozen diamond dogs, around forty griffons, three yaks, and a hundred ponies, a random assortment from each tribe.

Three vs one hundred. "Random." Your bias is showing, twi.

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There's 99 other creatures, and 100 ponies. 100 other creatures if you count Spike.

And random is referring to the pony subtypes here.

"Thank you Bright Day."

great name for a pony mistaken for Pinkie Pie

"Now come on, Everycreature is anticipating this moment, waiting for when we reach our appendages beyond in friendship!"

i see Spike has gotten used to species-neutral language here, nice touch


this was a very sweet sendoff to the world of G4 and the Mane Six! the assortment of creatures worked to underscore both the multispecies nature of Twilight's reign, and what we feel of their absence in what we have seen of G5 so far. it's a hopeful idea, that they're all lifted off and out in space somewhere, spreading friendship to faraway stars, with Twilight always keeping her memories of her friends with her. thank you for writing!

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