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TheLostBrony


Avid reader, amateur writer. What more is there to say?

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Words fail me

11045059
Is that a good thing or a bad thing?

Well...Scootaloo's stunt got her stuck somewhere unpleasant, not a surprise with what the stunt was. It's the where she got stuck that's surprising...

That aside, this was quite funny, though I feel bad for Big Mac and Scootaloo, especially since they both get a clonk on the noggin out of all this. Hope somepony checks for a concussion on those two.

11045095
Oh I love it, I just don't have the words for it:twilightsheepish:

Well, that was weird. It was fun, though. I hope you write more.👍

11045388
Thanks! Honestly I powered through writing it in one session, no idea where the idea came from. I had originally intended on doing purely a clopfic, but the situation was so ridiculous I just decided to make it kinda silly.

instructions unclear, ended up in big mac's urethra.

11046064
I wound up breaking reality only to wind up in an Equestria where everyponies gender was reversed. Now I have crashed into Big Mac's vagina and shooting myself into her womb.

Pretty good man

I could see this becoming a series. I like the idea and can see this happening to a number of characters in many different ways. I especially like that Big Mac is unaware of it. You can make scenarios that characters are stuck in Big Mac for days or could be found instantly.

11278393
Glad you liked it! I actually did do something similar in my story Midnight Snack, though it was a somewhat different scenario. :)

11278500
I read that story and liked it also. Im just a big fan of unaware stories. It's just fun seeing the victim trying to get out their situation while the oblivious character makes things worse for them.

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