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Nighttime Hazards


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Octavia has spent years burying her past – after all, if a secret like hers gets out how will anyone ever look at her the same way again? It would simply tarnish her reputation! However, when Starburst moves into Ponyville things take a turn for the worst… This newcomer knows Octavia’s secret and is about to bring the Earth Pony’s world crashing down around her. And it was all because of a contract Octavia thought she burned years ago.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 9 )

Very interesting, im intrigued as to where this story goes. :twilightblush:

1257150 sorry I wanted to source it but I forgot to. Thanks ill make sure to fix it

Huh. Well this is very interesting. I kinda want to see where this is going. Please, if you have it, more.

Let the Shitstorm commence

Wow. Was NOT expecting this to update. It was a pleasant surprise.
This story has a premise I have yet to see. I read the first chapter when you first posted it and was wowed. I hope the next chapter doesn't take as long to come out. You've got something good here. Don't lose it.:twilightsmile:

I snapped out of my daze. And several moments later the floor rushed up to me.

You either need to get rid of the "And" or switch the period to a comma. And a comma after "later".

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