Octavia has spent years burying her past – after all, if a secret like hers gets out how will anyone ever look at her the same way again? It would simply tarnish her reputation! However, when Starburst moves into Ponyville things take a turn for the worst… This newcomer knows Octavia’s secret and is about to bring the Earth Pony’s world crashing down around her. And it was all because of a contract Octavia thought she burned years ago.
Very interesting, im intrigued as to where this story goes.
1257150 sorry I wanted to source it but I forgot to. Thanks ill make sure to fix it
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Huh. Well this is very interesting. I kinda want to see where this is going. Please, if you have it, more.
Let the Shitstorm commence
Wow. Was NOT expecting this to update. It was a pleasant surprise.
This story has a premise I have yet to see. I read the first chapter when you first posted it and was wowed. I hope the next chapter doesn't take as long to come out. You've got something good here. Don't lose it.
You either need to get rid of the "And" or switch the period to a comma. And a comma after "later".