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AngelShy24


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"Poor little pumpkin still struggling through life, like dealing with a school bully who's filling her with strife.
Her family, friends, and teacher are all there, but the bully's mom doesn't seem to care.
But then a cute young colt moves to town, he takes intrest in Pumpkin and plans to to wipe off her frown.
When the bully alerts her mother of Pumpkin's recent glee, a plan begins to brew; one of deceit and grief.
Should I worry? Ha! Only an idiot would think I might, but this is what I was waiting for; a chance for me to strike!
For when one plays with this filly's heart she'll plan to make you pay, and then her anger sets me free so I can come out... to play..."

(The 3rd sequel story of Pumpkin's struggles)

Rated TEEN for violence and Murderous intentions

(Other characters Include the Cakes and Twilight Sparkle)

Quick drawing done by me.

The story concludes here: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/91585/pumpkins-darkest-hour

Chapters (11)
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Comments ( 65 )

Brilliant story. 5 minutes well spent! :scootangel:

Brilliant story. 5 minutes well spent!:scootangel:

Must destroy envy :flutterrage: and update soon love the story :pinkiehappy:

he takes intrest in Pumpkin and

Interest*:facehoof:

Just out of curiosity. Is English your first language?

And so starts the third part of the Pumpkin saga!:pinkiehappy:
I am looking forward to more.:pinkiesmile:

Where's the first story? I can't find it.

1270415
Make sure the 'View Mature' icon is checked because the first story is mature.
It's called "Pumpkin's Tantrum Spree."
Hope that helped.:scootangel:

1270439 Oh, no wonder I couldn't find it XD

Is Minty a Unicorn, Earth pony, or Pegasus?

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:facehoof:Oops, she's an earth pony; I'll add that now.

Yes! A triquel!

You have also gone far from when I started watch you it looks like.
Okay, must quit now, school in only some min.

1368394
If you're excited about a triquel,:pinkiehappy: then how about a quad...:ajbemused: well, a forth story. I have decided that this story will conclude in a forth story that I am planning. Can't tell anything about that, but it will be EPIC... hopefully.

1369236
Wow!
A quadquel!

Also done whit the first chapter, and I wanna say that Ruby Rose is not on my fav list of nice characters.

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:trixieshiftleft:What's your thought of her mother?:trixieshiftright:

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Trust me, you don't want to know.

1369949
Just as I thought. Things like this can easily piss people off, but also that kind of plot can make for a great story.
So prepare to get angry:ajbemused:, upset:raritydespair:, mad:flutterrage:, pissed off:twilightangry2:, and maybe a little scared:fluttercry:... but prepare for some dawww-ness as well:heart:

1370083
I knew what I was getting into when I started reading the description.

I am a bit, you-will-not-be-able-to-sit-for-a-week-angry/mad at her.

This is a good story.

Ruby u r a jealous bitch who cant take no for an answer:twilightangry2:

ossim story is ossim:pinkiehappy:.
Plz continue:moustache:...

WAIT. what if the same thing that possesed princess Luna and turned her into nightmare moon is the same thing that is possesing pumpkin :pinkiegasp:.

That evil spirit has some nerve :twilightangry2:.

1507703
Nope,:pinkiehappy: that's not it!
But that reason will be revealed later in the story.

Damned fools!:flutterrage:
They should both rot for their sins which cannot be atoned for!

Excellent work.:pinkiehappy:
Awaiting further releases.:fluttershysad:

Buck u envy u must be punished preparing to fire friendship cannon:pinkiecrazy:

Inb4 mom is bipolar too.
Also, just how strong is Ruby that she can cast a mind control spell? They certainly don't feel like younger ponies.

1587481
Her mother taught her, but more of that is explained later.
As for the age, they are a little bit older than the main fillies are in the actual show.:twistnerd:
Given the the personalities of the CMC in the show, It wasn't too hard to think of these characters to be as they are in this story.

1587607
Aside from the occasional longer wording , I think the characters are fine. Maybe a bit more mature than me, but that's not saying much. :derpytongue2:
I was poking at the mind control part. In every continuum I know of, mind control is a high tier of magic, far beyond the realm of any normal magic user and definitely out of range of a young girl's capability.
(The want it need it incident doesn't count because that's causing attraction, and then the ponies act on their own; as opposed to controlling the pony herself and forcing her to do something).

1588905
You know what, you just gave me an idea!:raritystarry:
Maybe instead of mind control, it can be a lying spell. She won't be controlling him, but the spell will make him act the opposite towards the user and anypony the user mentions. I think I'll change it to that.:pinkiehappy:

1588948
A bit like Discording somepony, but on a smaller scale... That sounds a bit more believable, if a bit overpowered.
But with potions... anything is possible with potions.

Noooooooooooooo:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:


Also on another note:pinkiecrazy:

I remember when something like this happened to my cousin and she came home crying.
It was worth paying his hospital bill.

Of all the idiotic....Ruby!:flutterrage:
Awaiting further releases.:fluttershysad:

Ruby u bucked up bad u pretty much just signed ur death warrant :facehoof:

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Thanks to her mother and knowing about Pumpkin's cu.... :twilightoops:um, condition, she secretly train her to be able to handle Pumpkin's inner power.
Unfortunately, for Ruby, it's not going to go as planned.:facehoof:
If thou is confused of why they are doing this, answers to those thoughts will be coming soon.
For now... be ragefully mad!:flutterrage:

This is part of what was originally going to be a whole chapter that I just finished typing, but then decided to split it up in 2 separate chapters.
I will post the next one tomorrow morning:trollestia:

Intqriguing.:pinkiehappy:
Also, Ruby, get your flank to tell Pumpkin it was you all along already!:flutterrage:
If you truly cared about Acer, you would.

Ruby u dumbass and envy i despise u with every fiber of my being u bitch:pinkiecrazy::twilightangry2:oh and first:pinkiehappy:

1750082
Yeah, I know what you mean.:twilightsheepish: My older sister gets pissed off whenever I mention my Envy character


Envy...must...die....:pinkiecrazy:

1751130
Whoa, whoa! :pinkiegasp:Hold up... easy now...:twistnerd: this story will take care of her; don't worry.:twilightsmile:

1752008
I...do hope so!:pinkiecrazy:

Never you mind, we'll probably sort this out in the end.

Otherwise... We will be forced...
....to take action.

...execution. By painful process of gradual disintegration.:pinkiecrazy:
Awaiting further releases.:fluttershysad:

Envy should be forced to clean every outhouse in Ponyville... with a toothbrush :pinkiesick::flutterrage:

That's after she recovers from the mama grizzly style beatdown she's sure to get from the Cakes and Acer's parents.

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There's no execution, but she will get what's coming to her.:trixieshiftright:

I can't wait for the next chapter
:moustache::moustache::moustache:

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