The first human to step foot in Equestria, Lukas Hart, had just recently heard about a far away town called Maretime Bay, so he takes this opportunity to go and visit said town and ends up getting wrapped in an adventure to restore magic to the world. Will Lukas and his new friends be able to do this important mission or will it end up being a massive failure?
Hi, just read this story and it’s great so far, let’s just hope you don’t take too long with uploading chapters for this story, like you do with your other stories, cause I like to see where this story goes. Keep up the great work!
very interesting beginning, I look forward to the continuation ... good job...👏
Does the G5 My Little Pony movie have a villain song in it?
Hey there, I’ve seen your other stories and I just want to tell you PLEASE DON’T CANCEL THIS STORY!!! It’s really good and starting to get really interesting.
Why don't you respond to comments?
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love the story already, can't wait for more. keep up the great work.
Believe me, if this story was cancelled I would be completely upset. I also like the little conversation between Lukas and Pipp, are you planning on having them have a little crush for each other, because if you do I hope you’ll have Lukas save Pipp when she’s falling during the battle scene. Anyways, great work on this chapter, can’t wait for the next one. Hopefully, it won’t be too long as you said. :)
What happened to ‘Pony Up’ chapter?
Nice job you improved the chapter and made it longer, can’t wait for the next chapter and see what happens. :)
Nice job with this chapter as always, can’t wait for the next chapter especially the battle scene, that I hope will be in the next chapter, if not, then keep up the great work! :)
Hey there, just checking to see if you’re doing okay. Can’t wait for the next chapter! :)
What’s happening I want to know what happens next.
Very nice job can’t wait for the next chapter.
I can’t wait for the battle with Sprout, keep up the great the work.
I’m not trying to rush you, but you said that you wouldn’t take forever to upload a chapter, what’s happening?
It’s been nearly a month since you last updated, I’m interested to know what happens next.
This is essentially the classic death egg in a nutshell.
I know you’re on hiatus, but please don’t take long cause I can’t wait to see the battle against Sprout that’s coming up next. Also, nice job on this chapter, keep up the great work.
I hope you’ll do a version of Make Your Mark with Lukas in it.
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Are these canon to the other Lukas stories?
I just have one question, why do you keep taking off Lukas Makes His Mark?
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Because Chapter 2 is coming soon
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Understood, but I was really looking forward to see what happens next.
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Do you mean Chapter 2 of the special or Chapter 2 on Netflix?
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Chapter 2 on Netflix
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Are the chapters still written?
When Make Your Mark Chapter 2 comes out, will you put back Lukas Makes His Mark?
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Yes
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So Chapter 2 is already out, when are you going to put back Lukas Makes His Mark?
It’s been a week since Chapter 2 came out. How long is it gonna take for Lukas Makes His Mark to come back up?
I am going to go out on a limb and guess that some type of time travel happened. If not, then the ponies from G5 were an isolated case of crazy.
Question, did you actually mean moons and months was a typo, or did you put months there on purpose.
How do the pegasi suddenly know what a human is? This story is being a bit inconsistent. Other than that, great story, will read more.
No villain song yet, but that does give fans the opportunity to make their own.
Lukas just keeps name-dropping.
Again, why do these ponies know what humans are?
Man, can you please stop taking off Lukas Makes His Mark, what’s the issue here?
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Nobody seems to be commenting or liking the story
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Well I like it, please bring it back. I’M BEGGING YOU!!!!
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I’m serious I like Lukas Makes His Mark, please put it back up, I’M BEGGING YOU!!!!
Please put Lukas Makes His Mark back up, I really want to see what happens next.
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I'm working on it
I was reading this while listening to Rad dead redemption 2 ambiance music. It fits well.
Please put back up Lukas Makes His Mark. Please?