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TheTwerp


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A normal day out with her friends turns to disaster as a unknown unicorn attacks Twilight Sparkle and the gang leaving Twilight fighting for her life and trying to avenge her friends.

But who is this unicorn and why is she after Twilight?

What is she trying to show her?

Chapters (4)
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Minor note: This is a first time attempt at writing a story out side of education. I'm planning it to be a small thing with about 4-6 chapters. Any critique is welcome as long as its helpful :twilightsmile:

i have always wanted this kind of story where twilight loses control of her temper and nearly all of her rational thinking :pinkiecrazy: this will be interesting

Second chapter out. I hear by declare that Magical Pony Flak Cannons should be made canon. :pinkiehappy:

Chapter 3 is now out. A talking chapter! Only one more to go. :raritywink:

Whelp here is the end of the story. I think that I will use this as a prequel to another story. I dunno there are a lot of storys like that...we'll see.
Anyway I hope you enjoyed this, I am now going to try my hand at writing a comedy. :pinkiecrazy:

I wouldn't mind if you continued this story...especially with that last line.:pinkiecrazy:

1270520 I think I will but I need to come up with something a bit more substitutional. This was originally a one-shot of a fight scene I envisioned that has sorta bordered out a bit more than I expected.

The night terrors is why my best friend is afraid to wake me at times...

What makes it scarier is that I cannot fall asleep without something next to me, well within reach.

The scene when Twilight is woken by AJ... I can fully relate.

PTSD is a bitch to live with.

All in all, an excellent story

1272256 Well while I can't really relate I am glad that it was portrayed realistically.

I don't really know anyone who has night terrors or PTSD so I thought that I was making myself look a bit stupid or making it a bit to dramatic.

Still I'm glad you enjoyed the read. :twilightsmile:

(Shameless self promotion: Check out my other story if you like my writing style. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/51135/Weekend-At-Pinkies)

That last part of this chapter, whoa!

Your welcome, and I shall check it out and add it to my list of reads :pinkiehappy:

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