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Timothy1509


I have been writing Twirax stories since 2019.

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All of Equestria's species known as the unicorns, pegasus, and earth ponies have been reunified thanks to the heroic and brave effort of Sunny Starscout and her friends. One day, Princess Pipp Petal have arranged a party to celebrate inviting all earth ponies, pegasus and unicorns. However, one particular pony named Hitch Trailblazer known as the sheriff of Maretime Bay was intending to go to this party to confess to the love of his life Sunny Starscout, will the sheriff succeed?

New story! I hope you all will enjoy it! Also, I do not own My Little Pony, it belongs to Hasbro, and the coverart belongs to it's original owner too.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 24 )

Your stories are always so sweet! I appreciate them ^^

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Thank you very much!

You should probably use the
MLP Gen 5 tag instead of MLP: FiM tag for the series tag.

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That was a really heartwarming and romantic episode that you wrote there! :heart: I just wished that you could have made the chapter a bit longer and see what Hitch's response to Sprout would be but he already walked back to the palace :pinkiegasp:

D'aaaaawww!!

Hitch-Sunny is my number one ship for those two. With Sunny-Izzy and Hitch-Zipp being VERY close seconds.

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What do you think of Hitch and Pipp ship? :pinkiehappy: :twilightsmile:

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It's probably my least favorite Hitch ship. I wouldn't hate it, but I just don't see them having much chemistry. Hitch and Sunny are adorable together. Zipp was showing interest in that "tomboy" way with lots of teasing and snark. Hitch and Izzy would be cute.

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Thank you, thank you very much, and do not worry, there is a sequel coming soon for this story.

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Thanks very much! I love the Sunny x Hitch ship very much, it is my number one ship!

Is it just me or Sprout is in a relationship with Izzy 😶

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Yep, Sprout is in a relationship with Izzy Moonbow.

This was so adorable, and I'm glad to see Sprout happy too. Thanks for writing this lovely and uplifting story!

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You're very welcome, I'm glad you enjoyed my story.:twilightsmile:

I also released a sequel.

I just realized this is the first Gen 5 fic I've read on FiMFiction... And I love it!! :pinkiehappy: Excellent work!!!

After that, Sunny and Hitch both began to slow dance in the middle of the crowd of ponies, the stallion was carefully matching the rythm and beat of the music during the dance so that he would not mess up, he was help Sunny do steps, twirls, and dips.

I felt like this is this song for them because you know Sunny is voiced by Vanessa Hudgens

This is a pretty sweet story and yeah I do ship these two so much and the ship between sprout and izzy nice this was a pretty good story keep up the good work

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Thank you very much! Sunny x Hitch is my favourite ship right now.

A fun and sweet read, but I would advise you run stories past a native English speaker before you publish them. I don't mean this in a nasty way, but at times it feels as though you ran several sentences through a thesaurus.

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Thank you very much for the comment. And sorry, I get a lot of new words from reading dictionary books.

Oh wow! 1K views in just one month after release? Thank you all so much!

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