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bahatumay #1 · Oct 24th, 2021 · 2 · 2 · Chapter 1: Love At First Sight ·

The concept is great. I like where this is going.
But a couple things threw me off. The quote box is for quoting other text, not for dialogue. Some sentences are missing punctuation at the end or after a name. Definitely could use another editing pass.
Also, second-person means ‘you’ are the main character, as in “Cadence was laying on some cushions reading a book when you walked into your bedroom, with a big smile on your face.”

cheshcat2 #2 · Feb 2nd, 2022 · · · Chapter 2: The Belly Of The Beast ·

Can't wait to read more

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NightFurySpeedey8156 #3 · Feb 2nd, 2022 · · · Chapter 2: The Belly Of The Beast ·

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Thank you, chapter 3 will be coming soon!

cheshcat2 #4 · Feb 2nd, 2022 · · · Chapter 2: The Belly Of The Beast ·

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How many chapters are you planning to make?

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NightFurySpeedey8156 #5 · Feb 2nd, 2022 · · · Chapter 2: The Belly Of The Beast ·

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Until Flurry is born, so... Alot!

cheshcat2 #6 · Feb 5th, 2022 · · · Chapter 2: The Belly Of The Beast ·

I wonder what's gonna happen next?

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NightFurySpeedey8156 #7 · Feb 5th, 2022 · · · Chapter 2: The Belly Of The Beast ·

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Hoho just you wait, the wild factor of this story isn't even at full throttle yet!

cheshcat2 #8 · Feb 8th, 2022 · · · Chapter 2: The Belly Of The Beast ·

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Well then hurry up with that third chapter

Sudrian Engineer

Sudrian Engineer #9 · May 22nd, 2022 · · · Chapter 3: Some Attention Required ·

Very wholesome chapter of cuddles!

Flora Blossom #10 · Jun 13th, 2022 · · · Chapter 3: Some Attention Required ·

My Little review & Feedback I did your review.

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