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A young alicorn, alone in the darkness. A unicorn, frozen in terror as her kingdom falls. They are millennia apart, and yet they are together.
An entry for FOME's Imposing Sovereigns III contest, with the prompt Cadence / Perseverance - though it could just as easily be Amore / Perseverance.
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I really liked the format of this story, good job. Obviously, there must be some sort of relation between the late Princess Amore and Mi Amore Cadenza, too bad the show never elaborated on that. I always thought Cadence was a reincarnation of Amore, and by the looks of it, you went for a similar thing. Or am I interpreting this wrong?
Wow, Shas. This is a wonderful piece.
The idea of Cadance having that spiritual connection with a distant ancestor is gripping and perfectly suited to her character. I love the structural and stylistic choices you made with this piece - all risky, but all executed brilliantly.
It's rare to find a great piece that is majority internal monologue like this, but this is a great piece. Amazing work as always, Shas ^^
One correction canonically Cadance was a Pegasus before she became an alicorn not a unicorn.
I love that you made this little connection into a story.
Oh, this is a fascinating concept with a great execution. I love how each not-quite-twin’s emotional journey reflects the other, rising in triumph or sinking into despair. The surreality of the contrast and how impacts each of them is especially nice. I’d love to see more with Cadence as she comes to the Empire and realizes just what distances her bond had covered.
For now, great work. Thank you for this, and best of luck in the judging
I love this concept, it always bothered me that the series didn't explore such an obvious connection/parallel. Brilliant story! Good job.