After Twilight finishes an extremely long and complicated letter for the Princess, her "Zapbook" computer crashes. Now she's a mare on a mission as she sets out to recover her lost data, and must journey to Canterlot to get her computer fixed at the mighty "Zap Store".
Will she learn more about herself in the process? Will she re-learn her lesson about not fretting over lost work? Will she learn abut friendship?
Or will she get screwed over by a snobby Zap Store employee?
Slightly based on recent events with my own Apple computer a few weeks ago.
And a special thanks to RainbowDashEpicness for helping me edit this.
Chapters (1)
Okay, here's another attempt at a one-shot. I know I'm not the funniest guy around, but I hope you get some kind of enjoyment or entertainment out of this little story.
As always, be sure to let me know if you spot any mistakes and criticism, as long as it's constructive and not destructive, is welcome.
I never understood the while Apple versus Microsoft thing, it makes less sense than the Great Console Wars
I liked it
That's Apple for you.
Alright, like I always say. Please notify me of any grammatical/spelling mistakes that you see. This allows me to improve upon my skills. Thank you.
1286134
Thanks again for the editing help man. As always, I really appreciate it
1286166 Its my pleasure man!
“No, especially not for a Ponyville hick such as yourself.”
Twilight’s jaw dropped open in offense before her face returned to a scowl.
“How…how dare you. Do you know who I am?”
“Yes, by your little gaudy saddlebag and your plain looks I’d say typical pony trash from that town..”
yay, now i officially HATE everypony from canterlot, (besides princess Celestia, Luna, etc.)
This is crazy and i don't think you will believe me, but a few seconds after reading this story my computer completely shut down and nothing was working. I finally got it back up. Anyways nice story. I think you portrayed everyone well, and the ending was really funny. This is going into my favorites.