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Lulamoon-Crystal


Trixie is not a dinosaur!

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When the four Princesses are in danger a silhouette jumps in between them and the blast sacrificing themselves.

Each chapter will be a different character dying and every pony reacting to their death,

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Comments ( 26 )

with a bit of tweaking this could be the intended finale to End of Ponies.

Your grammar is a mite messy, but the premise behind this story is interesting and I look forward to seeing what else you do with it. Best of luck!

So beautiful and sad. I love how even Spike got his own moment when he saw Starlight. Their friendship is underrated.

but her dream cane true

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:rainbowlaugh::derpytongue2:
Cane...


:twilightblush:Thanks for pointing it out through! :pinkiehappy:

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You’re welcome :twilightsmile:

You rock, mate! Keep on the good work.

Maybe a version with Spike next?

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That’s what I plan to do soon but not yet

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It talked about a war.

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Against the beast they were fighting that almost killed the princesses but someone sacrifices themselves

Wait, why did starlight die instantly while shining didn’t?

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Is that what she meant by war?

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Yes


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No clue, I think I did have an idea but I forgot, maybe it was will or that Starlight was a bit smaller and had less muscle

This is actually unexpected.

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So wouldn’t it be more of a battle then?

That might make sense.

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Nearly the entire chapter was unexpected.

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