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The_EE


Sometimes I like to write things.

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Apple Bloom has been quiet lately and it's up to her friends and family to find out what has been causing her grief. Honesty, when poorly handled, can bring about more pain however, for sometimes the things that matter the most can also seem the furthest away.

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Sad but not gushing, well done. Star and upvote for you! (and yes, there is no doubt :rainbowwild: is best pony)

Big Macintosh is best pony, but that's beside the point. Good job on this.

A sad but plausible story. There are some unspoken implications - especially that Mama Apple was doing something illegal to earn enough money to make ends meet.

It's hard but, really, it was hurting Applebloom to not know the whole truth. She has to know that her family love her; the fact they've never rejected her despite everything is proof of that. As for the rest... I wonder if she'll ever try to find that no-good stallion?

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There is an implication, but it's not quite what you picked up. Or at least not what I had in mind.

Let's put it this way: Their parents didn't have a happy relationship, at least towards the end of it... but it takes two to tango. AJ's father might have had a bad temper, but their mother wasn't perfect either.

Edit:
Also, thanks to everyone for reading so far!

After reading and noticing the immense amounts of imagery, well its a mix of jealousy, admiration, and thought.

Great work. You really handled the emotions of the whole situation well. It was surprisingly very heartwarming.

JBL

This was so sad and yet so awesome and yet so SAD! :raritycry:

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