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Everypony knows Scootaloo is one of the three Cutie Mark Crusaders and one of the best scooter riders in Ponyville, but what does she do in her past time? Well, let's just say it's not a very healthy pastime for a young filly...(Special thanks to Drunk Ragdoll for the awesome and custom cover art, and a special thanks to Inganno of the Frost for proofreading.)

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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
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found this and thought it was uneeded...."The little white filly rolled her eyes before picking up her daisy sandwich again....the " at the beginning wasn't needed

1260740 Haha. I'm glad you liked it and fixed! :twilightsmile: Thanks so much for proofreading! Everyone else, I hope you enjoyed my first little one shot! :pinkiehappy: Also, thanks to Drunk Ragdoll for the great artwork :moustache:

If you feel like you're as awesome as Rainbow Dash and you can take on several fights at once, don't try it our you're out of the club." --> don't try it or

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowwild::rainbowlaugh::rainbowwild:

1263175 Thankies!! :pinkiehappy: I'm very glad you found it so funny :rainbowlaugh:

1263221 Thanks so much Phoenix! :pinkiehappy: I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

This is completely insane. I love it.

1263264 Why thank you very much! :pinkiecrazy:

I bucking LOVE this. Honestly, there wasn't a single moment that didn't make me laugh! :rainbowlaugh:

1263285 Thank you so much for your praise:rainbowkiss:!

That was awesome! :rainbowlaugh:

1264537 Thank you very much!! :twilightsmile:

the only reason scootaloo was so pissed at that one rooster was becasue of gender bias.

1266065 Caught that one did ya? :twilightsheepish: I wanted to convey that as well, since she is a tomcolt by nature. :twilightsmile:

1271119 Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed. :pinkiehappy:

Now this is hilarious! love the fact scootaloo speaks chicken! ha glad she won against steve.

1272963 Of course! It's her native tongue! :rainbowlaugh: Thanks for your enjoyment of the story. :twilightsmile:

Was laughing so hard on this I almost cried, you did very, very well, lost it when Sweetie Belle could hear
Scoots words miles away and thought Fluttershy's reaction was GENUIS! Going to fav 100% and if I could watch you my friend trust me I would but my computer won't let me for some dumb ass reason and I got so many friends I need to keep track of.

1282660 Haha! Thank you so much for loving and enjoying it! :pinkiehappy: Believe me, that's alright. I understand, with you having computer troubles and all. :twilightsheepish:

1282679 Made my night let me tell you, hoping you like my own stories, after I get done with the chapter I'm reading now I'll take a look at your other work, alright?

1282693 Sounds good!! I will definitely check your stories out as well! :pinkiehappy:

1282700 That would mean a lot to me my friends, but I'm not all that great to be honest, not like many other fans here I know :rainbowlaugh: and hoping you'll leave honest reviews if you DO find the horribles pieces of work worth your view :derpytongue2:

1282757 Well, I will give you my honest opinion of them. This I can promise you. :twilightsmile: Believe me, I know alot about over criticizing your own work. :twilightsheepish: I hope you enjoy Feral as much as you did Chicken Fight Club.

1282773 Thank you very much and it's a lot, not alot, believe me that's really hard to get corrected even now, and I'll be sure to take a look at it in a few minutes, be warned that when I say honest I mean telling the truth weather they wish to hear it or not, not to be mean or cruel and never personal but it's what we all have to do to give them a taste for the real world, correct?

1282803 I only write "alot" in my commenting, not in my actual stories my friend. Yes, I do agree with you on this. :trixieshiftright: Although, it is important you stay kind in your criticism, otherwise what's the point of being a Brony? :twilightsheepish:

1282864 Then I am sorry for my 'outburst' and take back my wording and hmmm....true very true. Very well, I'll do what I can to be a bit more kind when reveiwing but I make no promises :rainbowlaugh:

"Bitch..."
BAD WORD IM TELLING
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!!

1287689 Hehehe. No bad words here :scootangel:

I started tonight looking to see how many people have done a fight club fan fic. What I found was much better then I hoped...This story is fantastic.

1353010 Thank you very much! I tried to give it the comical feel of the show while also retaining the somewhat dark humor of Tyler. Your praise is very much appreciated. :twilightsmile:

1353031
I could tell that actually...the only thing I have against you is that I didn't think of this sooner....

1353037 Haha. Well, you could always write a sequel! :rainbowlaugh:

Mother of God!!
XD
I haven't laughed this hard in a good while.

My favorite parts were the Sweetie Belle dictionary bit mostly causeI didn't know you purposely misspelled a word and the ending won me over.

DAT Ending hahahahaha

Great Job man. No lie. It was fantastic.
Plus I was listening to this song while reading to add to the ambience

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1476272 Thank you soooo much Madara! I appreciate all the awesome feedback! :pinkiehappy: I'm glad you enjoyed. :rainbowlaugh: Also, love that song. :rainbowwild:

Comment posted by K Bird deleted Mar 28th, 2015

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NOW FIGHT YOUR RIVAL!


Location
Ponyville - Sweet Apple Acres

Chicken vs scootaloo

Chicken Ultra 1
The Fying death

Scootaloo Ultra 2
The Wrath of Raging pegasus



who will bask in the glory and adoration that comes with being declared the world's greatest fighter?

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