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Natedogg2006


I've never called myself a brony, now I'm writing mlp fanfiction and enjoying it.

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This story is a sequel to Greatest Fear


Rainbow Dash and Applejack compete all the time. For the most part the athletic girls come out about even most of the time. But there is one area where Rainbow Dash just can't seem to beat her at all. Applejack is completely unflappable, and it annoys Rainbow Dash to no end that she continually fails to spook her. But seeing as it's Halloween, the day when trying to get under someone's skin is socially acceptable, it seems like the perfect time to try to fix that little shortcoming.
But Applejack is starting to wonder just why it is that Rainbow Dash is spending so much time trying to get her attention. It's shaping up to be a long holiday at school for both girls. Is there something Rainbow Dash can do to scare Applejack, and just what will happen if she does.

This is not a direct sequel to the original Greatest Fear, but rather another story with the same premise. Therefore you don't need to read the original as the events of that story are not connected to this one.

Happy Halloween everyone. Decided Halloween needed more attention this year, so I decided to make Greatest fear into a series. At this point each will be a stand alone story, only joined to the original by a title and will not affect one another. Will I publish them every year? Maybe. Will they all feature Rainbow Dash? Maybe. Just having some fun with this. Let me know what you think down below.

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Comments ( 22 )

This was written really well! I always found the AppleDash ship adorable so i'm happy you added that! Keep up the great work!

11035027
Thanks so much. I think of all the characters, my internal dialog can shift over to Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, and Applejack the easiest. In that order. So I write for them a lot, even if this is only my second AppleDash ship.

11035027
Oh, and thanks for the fav as well:ajsmug::rainbowkiss:

Not too bad. I really like how this isn't just a retread of the previous story; Rainbow and Applejack's dynamic feels different than Rainbow and Fluttershy's. And yet both manage to stand up really well on their own.

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I really appreciate that. I love the characters, so I always feel like I accomplished what I set out to do when their interactions fell appreciate.

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Oh, and thanks for putting it in your library :pinkiehappy:

Took barely over a day to get over 100 views. Thanks everyone.

Omg this is amazing, you did a great job on this! The appledash was lovely and you write them so well!! I hope you are able to write more!

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Don't tell anyone, but I'm planning something that's going to happen pretty soon. :raritywink: and thanks so much, it was pretty fun to write. Even if their voices in my head kept disagreeing with how the story was going to go initially and I had to change the whole structure of the story as I was writing it. :raritydespair:

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Oh, and thanks for another fav BTW :pinkiehappy:

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Aaaaaa I can’t wait to see it good luck :twilightsmile: wow it sounds like you worked really hard on this and it really shows amazing work again :yay::heart:

Nice. Love the psychological interplay.

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It was fun to write. Their personalities forced me to think deeper about how the story would end up going. I'm happy with how it turned out. Thanks for reading.

I could get use to that

the d is missing in this

also, you basically got every single instance of then wrong and wrote than instead.

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Dang, I thought I was getting better at both of those. Thanks again and thanks for the fav. :twilightsheepish:

This is really cute! AppleDash is a great ship.

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Thanks, I have no idea who I'm writing for this Halloween

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I'm always open to suggestions :pinkiehappy:

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FlutterPie? How about something with Sunset?

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FlutterPie might be a challenge, but Sunset could be fun. I did always want to do a SunShyne, it being a little guilty pleasure of mine. I had a story a while back I wanted to do, but I could never make it work. Maybe I could adapt it. Thanks.

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