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Magic has returned to Equestria and all is well. As the royal sisters were about to return to Zephyr Heights, they suddenly remember that they are "phony ponies full of baloney".
At least the prison is nice.
My take on a certain overlooked plot point thanks to Sprout. Feedback and comments are welcome!
EDIT (8/10/2021): Wow. 50 likes. Thanks guys!!
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Shouldn’t that be “Sunny’s plan”?
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If the royal family always knew that the charade would eventually fail, it would make sense to have some nice luxurious prison cells.
And what about the accomplices? The three of them alone couldn't pull this off. There are a lot of ponies who knew and didn't say anything.
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Where do you think the "overwhelming evidence" came from?
Funny, heartfelt, well written characterization... Everyting I could want in a short story/fanfic. Nice work!
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Thanks. But I apparently have a long way to go before I will be the same league as the short fics that keep appearing in the featured box with 50+ likes.
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This one has a great amount already, Just gotta keep at it, you know? Lets hope you get there someday!
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Well you got to the 50 likes part at least.
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Duly noted. But the likes probably didn't come fast enough for it to be featured.
Still, 50 likes. Nice!!
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If you're looking to be featured, I would focus a bit more on the technical side of things. for example, the way the story switched between present and past tense was kinda distracting, and there were a couple of places that had an extra word or something like that.
Even with those bumps tho, having 60 likes on your 2nd story is pretty impressive, imo.
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I was brought to a screeching halt a few times by trying to figure out who was talking.