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Melody Song


A Bisexual Pegasus with a talent in writing and singing. I can also do magic-long story. Also, Luna is best Princess and the Wonderbolts are awesome. Change my mind, I dare you.

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When Apex Cornea asked Pharynx-dominus, Head General of the Hive's army, to mentor him, he never expected the outbreak of near war with the ponies. He never expected his mentor to be called away. He never even considered that Thorax, the Outcast, the Heirless Prince, the Rankless One, would try to leave the Hive because he doesn't believe in their methods.

Even more so, he never thought that he would end up seeing the older changeling...kind of has point. Now, there is so much more in store for him than he ever expected.

*Rated with the Violence tag for later fight scenes and blood*

Chapters (30)
Comments ( 58 )

11020771
That’s probably the first time I’ve seen unreformed Pharynx be nice.

11021392
Well, he had Thorax encouraging him

And now we come to The Times They Are A Changeling. Can't imagine Pharynx is gonna take what happens next very well.

Aight, I'm kinda excited to see the next part. Mostly cause I wanna see how Pharynx and Apex play into this

11072530
Oh trust me, he's not gonna like it. But remember, he's hurt, he might not have much of a say

11072624
And I am excited to show you!

My thoughts after Thorax left: 'Aight, prepare the anvil. It's about to get painful'

11079849
Especially for Pharynx, who really can't handle screw ups right now

“Transform into a gemstone, then I’ll carry you in. I eat gems, so they probably won’t think to inspect any that I’m holding.”

Huh... I guess that would explain how Thorax got past all the royal guards when returning to the crystal empire.

Once again, I'm excited to see how Pharynx and Apex will play into this, especially after when Thorax is accepted into the crystal empire

11088367
I've had that headcanon for a while, actually -- that Thorax shapeshifted into something inconspicuous, and that's why none of the guards saw him until he and Spike reappeared in the throne room

As for Phar and Pex, you'll soon find out, and I think you'll enjoy what I have in mind...

Does Chrysalis appear in this story?

11095301
Yeah, towards the end, and in a couple of the sequels.

“What are they?” Twilight asked curiously.

Wait, doesn't Zecora use herbs? Or does potions not really count?

11097935
Well, I think she does use herbs, but following the canon timeline, Twi hasn't been around Zecora enough to see her using herbs for her potions or remedies. So would be the first time she's seen herbal healing

“Hehe, ‘m gonna call him tha’ t’morrow.”

I am so ready to hear how Pharynx will react to that

11112700
*Snicker* You won't be disappointed

“I… well…” Pharynx stammered, making Shining snort in amusement. “I… just don't do it in public.”

Tsunderebug's back?

11122497
He never left. Phar just hasn't needed to put his walls back up for a bit

11122501
Still, love his reaction to Apex calling him Uncle

11122653
I wrote that scene purely for his reaction :pinkiehappy:

“What, the question about what x is if one-hundred thirty plus two-x equals one thousand three hundred? X equals five, it’s easy, any nymph can do it.”

Ok, now I just wanna see Pharynx sit through one of Twilight's lectures

11129281
He'll probably pretend to be bored while he's secretly understanding everything and only acting like he's not interested so Twi doesn't get excited

“I see.” Celestia nodded. “Don’t worry. The guards and other residents of the castle have been informed of your presence, and no one will be delivering any accusations.”

And the citizens of Canterlot?

11135671
Meant to imply that they don't plan on going into the city

11135679
I know, I'm just imagining what happens the citizens see them if they did

11135812
Probably panic until they see the princesses are with them

Pharynx blushed. “Yeah yeah…”

I mean, it's from an infant, so it can't be worse than 'uncle', right?

11143853
True, but for a Tsunderebug, it's downright lethal

“That, my little changelings, is the North Star. It is called that because no matter where you are in the world, it will always guide you home.”

North Star? Is that a reference to Jesus?

11151390
Erm...no, I'm not religious. The North star is an actual star in the sky, people used to use it as a natural compass

11151527
Ah ok then, also I know what the North Star is, I'm just asking rhetorically

11151541
Oh, no. Like I said, not religious, so you'll get very few concepts of religion dragged into my stories

“Yes.” Shining nodded. “They import it from outside Equestria, we were wondering if you’d like to try it. They have non-protein choices for us, obviously.”

Isn't it supposed to be non-meat choices?

“I think you two deserve a little treat, then a nice long sleep. I find everything seems better after you rest.” Cadence said, smiling softly.

Why does that sound like Cadence is treating Thorax and Pharynx like pets? Or is that just me?

11164995
Er-I was actually going for motherly

“But why?” Thorax asked again.

I feel like that's everyone's reaction when they saw Thorax's wings in 'To Where and Back Again'

11172580
True. I thought they were pretty though

“That, my little changelings, is the North Star. It is called that because no matter where you are in the world, it will always guide you home.”

That will only work so long as you are in the Northern Hemisphere... so not "No matter where".
To perform night celestial navigation in the southern hemisphere on earth, we have the constellation of Crux (the Southern Cross) and the Pointers (Alpha and Beta Centauri). Together they point to a spot above the south pole.

11173355
...Thank you for the astronomy lesson. But you realize this chapter isn't supposed to be a guide for how to tell where you are without a compass or map, right? It was supposed to be a sentimental chapter about Luna opening up to her new friends

By dawn, they had arrived. Apex waited until the train stopped to leap off. He breathed a sigh of relief as he trotted out onto the station platform. Only to bump straight into a black, chitin covered creature. He looked up, face filled with dread.

Now I'm just wondering who Apex encountered, mostly 'cause of how Apex reacted

11180029
Heh, well, either way, he definitely feels doomed

“Of course he didn’t… if I see that guy again, I’ll make sure he-!” Pharynx winced and reached a hoof to his injured side.

Oh, shut up.

YOU were right in the middle of raiding Spike's home—again—when Thorax pulled you away. YOU don't get to act like you're any moral authority. At least Thorax has the excuse of not having actively fought that day, even if that's not a super-strong argument either.

11187404
Well, yes, I do see your point. But keep in mind that Pharynx doesn't know who Spike is, beyond that he is a young dragon, he knows the Princesses (which automatically makes him a "threat" with Pharynx's mindset), and he made his baby brother cry. Right now, he's not thinking about what worse things he did to the ponies Spike lives with, he's thinking about what Spike did to his brother, and instinctively trying to stick up for the one that he cares about.

“I mean , you’re not supposed to show up until season 7!” Discord reached into his chest and withdrew a large packet titled SCRIPT . “And I don’t believe it mentioned any little changeling nymph at all… ah, I see, someone’s been editing it.”

Discord is breaking the 4th wall and is aware that this is not canon... I love it!

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