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PerigeeTheBat


Foals are adorable~

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Even in an infinite universe, a galaxy is huge. Across thousands of worlds, ponies from all trots of life find themselves facing different struggles and diverse choices to affect theirs and many other ponies' futures.

Some ponies find themselves growing up in the ruins of what used to be capitals of industry or culture. Some ponies are raised just as the ancient Equestrians were. Some are from city worlds so grand and big that they seemed like several worlds within themselves.

No matter where they come from, and no matter how they were brought up, ponies all have an innate connection to the magic that spreads everywhere they go, formed by the bond of ponies everywhere.

Starlight Blossom has always wanted to see the universe beyond the bubble surrounding her world. She had heard stories of the many different places out there, and couldn't help but yearn for the beyond. Without magic, she struggles to find contentment in her home, even though all is peaceful and ponies go living without fear.

Fireflight, on the other hoof, is a pegasus from Spitfire Prime, the third-largest of the four ecumenopoli of the United Friendship Federation. Her parents took great care of her and her sickly brother was born in her mid-teenage years. When she was seventeen, she tearfully accepted the begging of her mother to take her brother and leave the ecumenopolis for a safer home, only having enough money for the two of them.

In a grand series of coincidences, Fireflight and Starlight find their stories converging. In this journey, both discover that their views on the universe could do well for a slight shift at the least, and together, they find the most important magic of all.

The cover art is not owned by me. It is by Jakub Grygier.

I have decided to cancel this story because I cannot meaningfully continue it. The way I've built my sci-fi universe has changed, and I need to put more effort into outlining a story before I really get into it.

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This seems to have the potential of an awesome epic. However, are you motivated to finish? One of your other stories is incomplete since 2019 and the other is canceled.

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Oh, absolutely. Those other stories were just random thoughts I had that never filled out, but this one has been brewing for years. I've put way too much time into building this future to not push it through.

there's enough in the info section about this story to fill MANY chaptors, new Story to folllow, sweet,

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That's great to hear. Also, if you're interested in improving your writing quality, I would be happy to help you out as your editor. I see a couple of areas that can be improved in the first chapter. Let me know if you want me to give you feedback. Or if you're happy with the current quality, that's fine too.

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That would be great. I have trouble getting into these as I'm not too good at creative writing.

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I have read some of your fictions and I'm kind of amazed in some point that there not finished yet. However creation is an endless cycle. It doesn't matter if the idea is terrible as long as your positive to start from beginning to end... I think you should start off as reading your own fictions as well.... and practice the middle and the end... other wise your going to be stuck and then it's will seem too far to reach a complete.

Recommendation have an outline... This outline is the best thing for new writers and it help me out a lot. I hope this information will do good for you as it did for others.

Now I'm getting off topic let's take a look at this fiction...

I have to say there are many ways to end such a great piece of an idea for this fiction... I wont tell you... but it comes from the mind of your own creation. So far I do seem to think this story has it's interesting for ideas and many more for chapters that need to be written. :3

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Apologies. I am writing a new story in a similar universe, but I plan to post way more of it at once so that I don't do what I did with this story, or any of my others. I think my mind just wanders off too far if I only have one or two chapters.

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