Derpy convinces Minuette to use Doctor Whooves' time machine. Things get out of hand when Derpy decides to dig a hole...
Part of the third(?) SALT contest. Check it out here: http://www.fimfiction.net/index.php?view=group&group=936&thread=4291
Also thanks to adamscage for the pic.
did you copy the same picture from Ravensdagger?
1253107 it's actually a group event that Ravensdagger joined in on.
Meanwhile, after a quick read-through, it wasn't bad. only one random mistake caught my eye. The very last sentence had the word sepeaate in it. you might want to fix that. otherwise good job despite the lack of time the rest of the group had.
Derpy is secretly a genius!
I don't think I could 'improve' this story to make it any more strange. The improved version of this story is just a blank screen.
You're welcome.
I have absolutely no idea what just happened in this story. I suppose this is why stories shouldn't be written when you're extremely tired.