Fred Walsh was trying to sleep for the night, but a portal sends him to Equestria, in the year 796. There, he has to find a way back while also ensuring everything is in shape for the future.
A/N: This is pretty much inserting myself because I came up with this in my brain and it wouldn't leave.
Rated teen for some language, previously rated dark, but I don't think it quite warrants the tag. Warnings will be posted at the top of the chapter if they seem dark-ish.
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Interesting, a different take on the SI genre taking place before the events of the show. Overall it's good, I would like to see where it goes plus I am a sucker for HiE.
quite decent, it has been tracked, waiting to see where it goes
okay first of i cringe when i read read that the Fred was a brony, or a fan or mlp fim. hawing the human character a brony mean he will know the event that transpired on the show, and that i hate that concept. why, well because 90% of all authors i have seen missuses that and let the human character know everything in advance everyone´s name there back story early life things like that, i don't mined if the character keep´s that for his own thoughts, but as sone as the character starts blabbing information, and every pony thinks he is "seeing the future" or "starting to read minds" it destroys story, very few writers that i have seean can make that work and the one that do use it in a very subtle way. im glad to see you made it a bit in that way.
one other thing i want to mention is that this is the first time im reading a human crossover taking please before the main 6 was born, this will be interesting to see how this plays out, my only concern it that you will not have enough characters to work whit whit the main 6 and Luna gone but what do i know you may invent some new ones or make him travel in time as far as i know.
so in conclusion, i will be tracing this. the story was good same as the writing, nether one was the best i seean but good non the less, i was gladly surprised to see you dident make any major forth will braking moment, and i hope you handle the forth will braking aspect in a good way and not having Fred saying anything like, hey i know all this stuff about you and you world because i watch you on this box in my home every night.
keep the chapters coming, it will be intresting and fun to see where you´r taking this for good or bad
I too, like HiE fics, and this one is now exception.
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That's why I mentioned the existential crisis. How would you react if someone came up to you and produced a very convincing argument that you don't really exist and mentions a bunch of things about you that you've never revealed? Either the existential crisis or you'd report him to police for stalking.
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yes i know and im so glade you did and that you seam to be sticking whit that, cant give you enough thumbs up for that
like the theme whit he beaning in equestria 204 to early btw, gone be fun to see what you will do whit it
keep the chapters coming
Ill take a guess who the "insane" pony is,Star Swirl the Bearded?
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Star Swirl was (presumably) a unicorn. I didn't even think of him at the time. It probably won't matter, but the prophet ends up writing Predictions and Prophecies, though that won't be in this story.
CRAP. Testie time for mr Fred XD
Now he'll eat hay -_-
fairly short, but decent
Hmm, any chance of this being the first Oc x Celestia fic ever?
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I'm sure I've already been beaten to it.
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Where? Besides clop.
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https://www.fimfiction.net/story/13537/Equestria%27s-First-Human seems like it's going in that direction.
EDIT: Guess it didn't.
as said, predestination. suse blantant shockand awe charge in tactics for the win.
an ok chapter. basically all action, with a cliffhanger!
shooorrrrtttt. but good.
The plot thickens and Fred effects what will be on the show.
Monday. Figures. Garfield was onto somthing.
i had a long comment. fimfiction ate it.
great chapter!
........ well S***
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I agree.
....... Leroy
Aw, oh well, was great while it lasted, hope you continue in the future
Read all in a single morning. Let me say, it is a good read
And I agree that it can be continued.
NO! YOU WILL CONTINUE IT! NO ARGUMENTS!
Use that dagger to fight a 50m tall demon.
Nice.
Fighting demons is easy as long as you have a shotgun.