Shadow's End

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In an alternate timeline, Twilight and Spike serve as the sole warriors within the princesses' elite forces. Their task? To protect the inhabitants of Equestria from the darkness that threatens to consume them.

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Fallen be the Vengeful · 27th Sep 2021 · 1,040 words
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Reprieve (Interlude) · 28th Sep 2021 · 335 words
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Sollace

Sollace #1 · Sep 27th, 2021 · 1 · · Fallen be the Vengeful ·

I would have normally given the story an upvote, but since I can't really do that right now, have this cookie instead.

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MellowSoul #2 · Sep 27th, 2021 · 1 · · Fallen be the Vengeful ·

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Thanks. I fixed the grammar error I mentioned earlier in the forum. That was almost enough for me to pull out my hair with rage, especially considering I edited everything twice to make it flow as smoothly as possible.

Sollace

Sollace #3 · Sep 27th, 2021 · 1 · · Fallen be the Vengeful ·

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Believe me, you did good. There weren't any mistakes I could spot, and even if there were, it's no big deal.

Some longer fics, I could re-read and edit it a thousand times and there would always be that one error that no one caught. It's part of what makes us human, and I've learned to just accept it and ask for help.

MellowSoul

MellowSoul #4 · Sep 27th, 2021 · · · Fallen be the Vengeful ·

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Yeah. It's not the most frustrating thing in the world, but it can be facepalm inducing at times.

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