• Published 26th Sep 2021
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I'm Lookin' Out For You - Scout Feather



Sunny and Izzy are destined to be best friends forever...or maybe something more?

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Comments ( 27 )

GNGNGNGNGN

I'm having an overdose of cute heartburn, and I love it.

Another good chapter, well done!

I will die of diabetes with this.

11000941
"Here lies Hakuno: He read too much cute fiction."

this is so good. I always judge characterization and yours is spot on.

Chapter 3 was good too. The previous chapters led to it naturally and the simplicity of it was perfect.

I'm now watching this because this is officially my favorite ship of gen 5 now.

Huh 🤔 so you have more planned? Cause I’ll be honest; it could probably end here and I would be satisfied, but at the same time I definitely see more you could do 😅

11001873
I have 1-2 chapters more planned, but I’m gonna take a bit more time with them, maybe up to a week. After that, a Hitch x Pipp story.

11001171
Thank you! I pride myself on being a character writer first and foremost and I spend stupid amounts of time studying character mannerisms and rewatching clips to really get it down.

11001555
It was a movie reference.

11002134
Yeah, it just reminded of of that character is all.

11002133
it shows.

wish I could commit like that. Unfortunately (fortunately?) everything I write tweaks them ever so slightly into my own version of them. No matter how hard I try.

I like this very very much and require more.

11002345
Anyone can, but it’s a matter of dedication, I think!

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I’m trying! Sometime this weekend for sure. Cross my heart.

11006418
Izzy knows what she’s got. Just wait until you read the next chapter.

11006556
You know you're right I actually made time yesterday to rewatch the movie cuz I really had to study zip p

11006556
Yes, yes Izzy does. It was very adorable.

That was super fluffy.

I do think this pairing will become more common as things move forward by the way. It feels very natural.

11006556

I’m trying! Sometime this weekend for sure. Cross my heart

You liar!

Take this seriously and I will slap you

11012117
Sorry. I had a migraine that pretty much ruined my whole weekend. There was a lot I didn’t get done. I’m trying, though. :raritydespair:

I absolutely love this story. It is stories like this that move Izzy x Sunny much closer to being my # 1 ship, even above Starlight x Twilight and Starlight x Trixie

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Still in the works, don’t worry! I’ve been very very busy with IRL stuff. It’s complicated.

Being that it's been a decently long enough amount of time and I haven't even approached the next chapter, I'm going to mark this story as complete. After a reread I'm satisfied with how it ends and see no reason to add another chapter.

I may, in the future, write an epilogue or a sequel. Never rule that out!

Thanks for reading!

So good!!!!!:pinkiehappy:

Excellent work

Aaaaand, I'm caught up. Added to Favorites, and Tracking for whenever you get around to those "1-2 more chapters" if you do. It works as is, but I definitely feel like there could be some conflict with the low point of the movie and eventual resolution, possibly an epilogue of sorts if you're up to it. That said, either way, I'm definitely gonna use this as a companion piece to the movie itself, and maybe I'll read it alongside the movie until I can't tell canon from fic.

I honestly like Hitch x Pipp better than Hitch x Sunny personally. Now the question I have is what you're gonna do with Zipp. Though, by the time you get to that (assuming you do), the series might be airing and give you some more characters to work with.

11014119
You have great taste in ships, agreed on all counts. Now, thoughts on Starlight x Chrysalis? I'm a huge rivals to lovers fan personally.

11085489

Starlight x Chrysalis? I'll pass on that one, not a fan of it.

11085489
You definitely make some compelling points on future chapters.

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