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Well, its very original,i like it!
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Thanks! Twilestia is bestia, lol... I've been rolling the idea of a monstrous Twilight for a while, but I don't think this is a perfect incarnation of it. Im'a try again, later.
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At least its true happy end without question. (That i dont get in "Isekai")
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Are you kidding? You did great! But I understand that by your standards it could be better. The reasons and motives that led Twilight to become that thing and seeing the way those two ended up together were incredible! I always loved and entertained reading a monstrous and powerful Twilight.
So if you were to think of a sequel or a similar fic in the future, I assure you I'll be one of the first to see it.
Well This was amazing! My only sadness is that it isn’t a porn story hah! I suppose that makes it more special, but dang this level of quality with some steam would be a chefs kiss hah!
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Yeah, Isekai was... a thing I did. lol. It's a good reminder that even in an existential horror story, Celestia and Twilight still hook up. Even if it's super fucked up. lol.
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Thanks! Really appreciate the comment! No sequel, but I strongly considered doing porn takes for a bit of it. It might still be on the table, I dunno. But this story wasn't supposed to be a porn story, exactly.
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Thank you for the comment! I wouldn't consider this one any particular level of quality, lol. It's got a lot of flaws, some would have been very easy to fix. Notably, I have no idea why I didn't split it up into smaller chapters. WTF was I thinking? I'm 50/50 on porn bits for it. I decided that while I wanted sex to be a strong theme, this wasn't going to be porn. That doesn't mean I can't write some weird, lovey, BDSM porn for it anyways. lol. We'll see if that happens.
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Well, you can try write next Twilestia story, where Eldrich horror transform in Princess of friendship. We dont have very much of this type of stories and this is really challenge for you. Its just idea what i have.
Found a typo. Should be “therefore”
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Fixed! Thank you! Also ironed out a few more I noticed... "they pastry selection" "was a were" and some others... I'm sure there are more. lol. I probably should have asked someone to proof read this, but that sometimes ends in disaster for me.
Wonder what's Discord's related to that realm, hell what's Pinkie's connection since she's basically an eldritch abomination.
Oh, finally had time to read this...
And loved it. Absolutely top-notch from beginning to end.
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Thanks! I have some complaints about it, but that's because I've read it like 20 times or more by now. lol. It has a lot of weaknesses, poor pacing, still too much character and not enough environment (one of my constant complaints about my own stuff) and the characters have too similar voices during some scenes. Some of it was done intentionally, but I hate reading those parts now, so I was probably wrong. lol. Anyways, thanks!
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Pinkie is a perfectly normal pony with absolutely nothing wrong with her she pinkie promises. Pinkie promises. Discord is actually, in my head, on the same level of Celestia and Luna-- one of the siblings. He's a physical manifest sibling, though, and not one of the outsiders. He probably even has a purpose, keeping reality shifting enough that it's hard for the outsiders to find a way to turn things to their favor. Luna keeps them out of minds, and Discord probably keeps them out of causality. Celestia keeps them out of the physical realm, or at least removes them. Most of them. There is one she likes. I'm on a weird "Celestia is a goddess, but what kind and why" kick right now. It's not good for my mind! lol
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I don't know, half elder thing Celestia was a fun take.
Another one of those really weird, but oddly good stories! I notice I've 'liked' quite a lot of your stories so far, I really need to go through the rest of them someday.
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Looking at it, I've actually got a pretty wide collection of things. That being said, most of them are dark clopfics, lol. I doubt you'll like most of them, but there are a few decent things hidden in there. About the only one that I think is especially bad is "Twilight and a normal pony" so avoid that. The rest mostly just have dicey content. Thanks for checking out my stuff and leaving a comment!
OH MY GOODNESS these LINES!! That's so raw to me I adore this fic in its entirety! Amazing work, author!
Well I see this as an absolute win, so Twilight became powerful, she has the ability to become even more powerful if she so pleases, and now Celesteia and Twilight are a thing now.
There are 2 things that I like, Twilight x Celestia and a very overpowered Twilight Sparkle, combine the two and I just found a new favorite story.
The middle of the story actually had me worried for a bit thinking Celestia was actually going to kill Twilight, glad that didn't happen.
I also like the idea that although Twilight did things that you would think there would be negative side affects (such as not having control over her body) there is none! This is definitely one of my favorite stories, I wish there was more like it.
Also I brought up the first bit because usually when Twilight studies dark magic or something, she then goes rouge and attempts to destroy Equestria.