Twilight has always had a lab beneath the library. But not everypony should know what she's up down there.
They may not take it well.
3° place in the speedwrite sketch contest in the Q&S group with this picture as prompt.
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Well, that last sentence certainly earned the story its dark tag
You know? I am fine with this? Anyone ever watch that movie with the dogs in the labs? Or watership down?
Even if it isn't fair I don't think just because Fluttershy disagrees on the price that she is wrong. It is after all easy to say something is right and fair when your in power...or their is a 'need'.
I think after such ahaunting ending I want to see how it ends? What if things continue...will Celestia erase Fluttershys personality? How would Twilight feel then? Their are just so many ways to write a sequel here? And to be honest I think this really in character and some ways I think Twilight and Fluttershy are very similar.
After rereading it is also clear the issue for Twilight and the other is not to find a better way to cure diseases (mitigate suffering of all life in the best way possible) but, to get her friend to 'calm down'.
It is apperent that they are talking about two different conversations and I think if she had considered or thought of or what have you...the end could have been different.
Ps. The story is better a second time. :)
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Thank you a lot!
People that read this beforehand told me that last scene was very vivid, so I tried to reproduce it in the pic. I hope it's faithful enough
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wow, you went deep.
Anyway, I doubt a different ending would have been possible, or at least without using force.
And yes, there a lot of way to write a sequel to this, but I don't think I will... It would turn either darker of too silly, and I don't want to ruin it.
Thanks for the comment!