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"Tragedy", not "Tragity".
11045046
I'm sorry, thank you for the feedback!
I don't know how dark this will be, but I want to read more to see where this fic is heading for some reason.
So, this is set before the first EQG film, right?
P.S. I thought the word 'Tragity' was an intentional misspelling on your part.
11045129
It is indeed set before the first movie but after the Sunset friendship breaking texts, also no i just spelled it wrong.
I'm excited that you want to read more thou! That makes my day!
This is starting off interesting.
Wow, if this is what sunset shimmer caused, then I’m surprised she was so willing to give her a second chance.
11046359
You will see why they forgave her in a later chapter, but its gonna get worse from here.
11046365
Does her forgiving sunset have something to do with her parents?
11046426
*Shrug*
11046582
It was worth a shot to ask.
Applejack needs to just get new friends. If your friend group could tear apart this easily, then you guys aren’t friends.
11051697
I submitted the chapter to early, LOL. I strongly apologise- i hope you liked the sneak peak thou!
Then again nothing will really change in the chapter- just checking for spelling errors and other with a friend.
11051726
I must ask, did you unpublish your chapter?
11051735
I did because i forgot to check for spelling errors- it should be out later today.
11051825
Ok, I just want to tell you. Sometimes, unpublishing a chapter will remove its notification but republishing it did not gave it back, supposedly to prevent notification spam or something.
11052137
Ya, this was purely an accident and i don't plan it to happen again. sorry.
Okay one thing that I noticed that doesn't make any sense is that Applejack is 17 in this story, sunset waking up the friendship happened either freshman South Mall or junior year , a 17 year old is not in any of those grades a 17 year old is a senior Applejack would be 14 15 or 16
11051726
So the chapter wasn’t done?
11052165
Maybe she got kept back?
11052165
I was trying to find the right age diffrence of AJ and AB, but i can fix it i guess.
i can also confirm that a 17 year old isn't always just a senior. I am 17 and I am a junior, sorry.
Why isn't this story rated M?
What was that?
I’m surprised she hasn’t lost it.
Cryptic is probably the reason applejack hasn’t snapped. I hope we see more of her.
11075763
Its mostly only swears and death thats gonna be bad, nothing I personally see that should make it rated M. Sorry.
11075923
This:
"A familiar voice screamed in the darkness as the lights danced back and forth. A shadow of a man stood lingering before a small girl, his axe bloodied and rot. Crimson red covered the wooden floors as large walls towered over the helpless girl. She was cornered, the man approaching with a wicked laugh. It was familiar, all to familiar. "
And this from the start of the book:
"Echoes of voices sang around the empty hall. Lights flickered on and off as a smile deepened in the dark, an all too familiar smile.
A scream sounded out as the air grew thick with the smell of blood. Chains dangled on the floor as heavy footsteps followed. He was here, and damn was he hungry."
Are related in a way to the story itself. In short its a small mystery to solve. HINT: they both take place in the same scene.
Good luck! :D
11076196
Oh ok