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Climaclysm


You'll sail the ocean, finding where you should be.

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Prince Solaris has been feeling a pair of eyes on him since the start of Dawn Court. Though the intensity of their stare is enough to give him pause, he decides to ignore them.

Those eyes seek him out, later.


R63'd Chryslestia. Takes place about a month after ACW.
Cover image by Fiona on Derpibooru.

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Comments ( 5 )

Howdy, hi!

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I think I will. Thank you!

That was quite well written. I would love to see more of this story. :)

Nice but very unpolished.

He didn't acknowledge the in-equine chuckle that came from behind him.

i've been looking for a replacement for "in-person"!

"The pressure that bears down on you and your moody little brother, perhaps. I do not waver under my duties."

ah, he is a moody little thing, isn't he?

"I know. It would be unnatural for the lesser to look down on the greater."

ah, the lies we tell ourselves!


it was fun to catch the references to R63 versions of Twilight and Raven, aw well as the unnamed mentions of Bolero and Gleaming Shield. and the idea of adding texture to the relationship between Celestia/Solaris and Chrysalis/Exuvium with making them former lovers is a good one, making Exuvium a very tragic figure informed by the canon Chrysalis's arc of loss and revenge and never letting go. your characters are well-drawn here, with Solaris having the gravitas and serenity of his position, and Exuvium his wounded pride and bitterness. thank you for the entry!

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