Twilight's life changes when she is accepted into a new college: the Canterlot College of Witchcraft and Wizardry.
There, she will make new friends, but also enemies, who will help her fulfill her destiny. One that she was not expecting.
Based on the firts movie of "Harry Potter" film saga
"Yer a wizard Twilight"
"Uh ya, kinda got the whole horn thing going on"
Good start but maybe don't copy the harry potter series 1:1, twilight has to have room to be herself and do the things she'd do
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"You're a witch, Twilight"
Why Fluttershy? There was Twilight just moment ago.
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It is already corrected
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He can write it however he wants boi
Also question for the author, you labeled this story with romance. Is that something that’ll come much later in the story or soon? Also is there anything you can say that wouldn’t be spoilers about that? I’m a bit of a romance novel reader and I’m curious
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Romance you'll have to wait until volume 4
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Alright, consider me on board the train that is this story
I hope you change the story a little bit because this chapter is almost a carbon copy of the first Harry Potter book with the characters changed to MLP characters.
Oh alright, I'll play nice. Who is going to be Malfoys?
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Wait until we arrive at Canterlot High and you will know
Lol got some oops for ya
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You might want to check out the site rules about crossovers here, what you have is bordering plagiarism which could get you banned.
https://youtu.be/o6F6u5TIUbI
Also I absolutely love the cover art
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"Thank you"
awesome chapter mate keep it up cant want for the next chapter
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Well, for the next chapter, I need you to tell me which MLP character would fit the role of Professor Quirrell (other than Discord, because I have it reserved for another character)
You know, because magic supposed to be secret, that's how
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I know
Let's see people, for the next chapter, I need you to tell me which MLP character would fit the role of Professor Quirrell...
Because right now I have an inspirational block and I can't think of who could interpret it!!
Hey you kind of put the names from the Harry Potter books instead of the, well you know sometimes
But other than that, it's pretty great so far
I don’t remember anything from the movies so I don’t know if that’ll make this better or worse
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Huh?
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Maybe Queen Chrysalis for Professor Quirrell?
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There is a possibility, thank you.
I understand wanting to change things around in your story, but why can’t Equestria have its own Philosopher’s Stone?
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So that they don't accuse me of plagiarism.
I'm a little confused here. They are described as humans, but the setting is described as Ponyville in Equestria. What Version of the show are we in exactly?
Gotta say, I agree with Treasurehunter20. I hope this is gonna be more than just a CtrlC - CtrlV version of Harry with MLP characters. I know my first story was also an adaptation but I did make changes and my own pieces of dialogue.
Reading on...
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Because it's an alternate universe, where the names are used for places.
So we have the Rich family as the Durselys. I can see the parallel.
Reading on...
I think you mean, nobody survived his wrath
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For the next chapter, I need a candidate for the role of Percy Weasley, knowing this list:
Ron Weasley - Starlight Glimmer
Fred Weasley - Flim
George Weasley - Flam
Molly Weasley - Firelight
Ginny Weasley - Flash Sentry
Any ideas?
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I think those rolls are good. Except I think you might want to replace Starlight Glimmer with Applejack. Whatever works for you it's fine
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It could work. Thanks!!
With that change, I could change Molly Weasley to Granny Smith and Percy Weasley to Big Macintosh.
However, this change would make me switch to the character I had in mind for Hermione. Any ideas?
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Derpy could be like Neville? As for a character for Hermione, and thinking either Sunburst or anyone who's smart and good with magic.
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Also when I find myself out of ideas, I just watched like the thing I'm trying to write my story off of. If you're running a story off of Harry Potter, I just watch a movie of Harry Potter
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As for the character for Neville, I already chose a perfect one: Fluttershy.
And as for the Hermione thing, just give me a character that would fall in love with Applejack in the future.
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Caramel then?
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No, try someone else.
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How about coming up with an OC?
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I have no inspiration for OCs.
Does one occur to you?
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Maybe a wizard boy named Lightning Cast? He would be born a wizard like Hermione, and studies very hard to become a great wizard. His skin would be bright blue with dark yellow hair and yellow eyes?
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I like it.
Who's Spike filling as?
Added to read list.