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Neutral Boy


First time of writing my own stories on here since the first episode of my little pony friendship is magic.

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Long before the timeline battles, before the awakened Elements of Harmony, there lived six ordinary young mares in Ponyville. Twilight Velvet, Windy Whistles, Pear Butter, Miss Shy, Cloudy Quartz, and Cookie Crumbles. However, their lives would soon change when they're come across an orphaned human infant and they each took turns of raising him secretly with love and caring. What the young moms don't know is that years later on, a malevolent force would invade their home. Can the mares be strong enough to take him away from the forces to a safer location of a possible human remnant land, even if it pains there hearts?

Mostly {RGRE}. Other characters in the crossover will be revealed later.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 20 )

Full fluttershy's mom what about fluffy

I'm a little scared that this story will have him become a the chosen one who can do no wrong and get all the mares

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But knowing from his other fics, most likely

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That's a good idea, but I thought of a better so thanks for that.

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Why so scared and sad now? It's just only one chapter of mine and no chosen one crap. Yes, I do like reading stories of many with chosen ones and in movies or tv series, but it's rare for me to do those ones so have no fear.

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I see it everywere in rgre and its very annoying

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Any reasons on why they're annoying exactly?

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for me personally its like I'm reading the same story with a different background "Oh, Human male You must be protected Let the mares protect you" even when said human proves his strength, or they are into some sort of relationship that to me just kills any character development because it becomes how to please the herd, or they are treated like cattle used for only clean and cooking and other things. not all are like that but rating pending they usually fall into into those category

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Fair point, but in my opinion, I did like some of the stories that are perhaps interesting and sometimes funny to read. Although, if it makes you feel any better or maybe not, I can at least have my story tone down to slight RGRE and the characters have more development.

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don't get me wrong I like Rgre as a concept but most stories I read with it seem to fall into the same pit falls that I listed before

Comment posted by Demonic Lemon deleted Jan 17th, 2022

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of this story I need more chapters before I can state any thoughts. The stuff I posted before were my fears of what the story may fall into

I was surprised to see this updated, thought it was abandoned.

I've been wondering are the girls married?

Hoping for more updates.

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The mothers of the Main 6 aren't married yet. I'm only going to write out the world building, plots, and characters before they would eventually encounter there love interests. Although, for the male human infant of the mare mothers, I'm going to be listing off some particular love interests in this Equestria world and from his crossover world as well.

Been waiting years for a chapter to come out l loveless ittt

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