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I just got to say the idea is fabulous. I am also a sucker for the stranger in a strange land
(Ironically did not like that book? So...ya.) I actually had a long form story that was not like this at all more...twin peaks and odd happenings.
I am curious if the through line for her leaving her home will be important bit in this story...and what it will be.
Liking what I've read so far. Pat seems like a decent guy and Flutters is cute as always
looking forward to more
Been waiting for the prose version of this. Thank you for leaving the lewds in this time.
Oh poor flutters im glad she gets to stay with someone more nice 😌👍🏻
Lovely story I can't wait to see more ❤️
Hehehehe.
Tell me about the rabbits, George.
This chapter was comfy as fuck. I like how they are taking their time with it and enjoying the kisses and snuggles, not just jumping to the breeding.
I really wish we heard Celestia sing more, her song was absolutely beautiful. Best part of that episode, honestly...
I wonder if Anton heard them. Next time Pat sees him, Anton makes some comment like "in soviet russia, pony rides you, eh?"
Damn you really went all out with this one. I haven’t read all of your stories but I think this is your best clop scene from what I’ve seen. Great work.
Been there before.
How meany chapters?
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In total there's 38 and an epilogue
Ah... yes. Spyro. The game where you roast animals alive to turn them into butterflies to feed them to a dragonfly.
Fluttershy would totally have fun with that.
Jeez shit went down on this one :/ Poor Pat. Poor Fluttershy.
Is there a link to the original story?
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Yeah, you can search for my username on 'pone paste', but that one is in greentext format with Anon, so- if you don't mind that you can get the rest of this story early. (There are minor edits but no significant changes)
Hopefully we get another blowjob scene 😋
This definitely means war.
I hope there is a sequel
There it is, the fabled end. This one has been really fun to write and hopefully also an enjoyable read.
So, what next? I am already working on editing another of my favourites, but it will be a slower process since I had originally written it in second person and present tense, both of which I don't really like anymore. I'm converting it to the more standard third person, simple past. When I'm done with that I'll start posting it, probably in the same overall manner than this one.
I'm a little disappointed with the ending. We don't see the goal, and I was almost expecting this to go longer and Pat and Shy work to free the other ponies. Do you have a sequel for this in mind?
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I do, in fact. That is the one I am editing right now.
An enjoyable read and I eagerly await the sequel
Hope flutters gives him a blowjob in the sequel
This was a great read. I can't wait for the sequel.
Either Mason is using those countries as tax havens or he's laundering money, possibly embezzling money.
Yep, definitely sounds like embezzlement.
Fluttershy seeing her gift was too cute.
Pat, you need to stomp a mud hole in that rich bastard and then spend a week walking it dry.
Pat, call the FBI, the ALCU, the ACLJ, the NAACP, the Rainbow Coalition, Amnesty International! Creat so much big stink about that bastard enslaving a sapient creature and his embezzling money that he'll rot in prison for the rest of his life.
Great story. Hope to see the sequel.
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Thanks! It's lovely to see people enjoying it. I can't wait till editing of my next piece is done and I can start posting it.
Pat’s co-workers seem like dickheads.
I take it back about his co-workers.
Haha I read this at my retail job.
Hahaha this is funnier than it should be.
This whole paragraph was uncomfortably creepy
Hey awf I just created this account to say thank you because getting shy got me in mlp stories (back in ponepaste) and I've gotta ask are you still working on the continuation of getting shy???
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Hey, thanks!
Work has been busy lately, so I'm focusing on my Mayor Mare story at the moment, but I do still have plans for a short sequel/epilogue, after which I'll tie this story into "Rosa". I'm about 30% into editing Rosa for fimfiction (switching it from second to third person) and touching it up a little. Can't promise any timeline, but Getting Shy is probably my favorite so far and it will be getting more love.
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Thanks man I really wanted something about their future together!
Now on to read rosa
Well, I tried. Pat is way too much of a poorly adjusted incel. I wish I didn't read his thoughts. He really is a creepy and gross stalker.
Still stalker-y as much as Pat denies it.
Also, Fluttershy's dialog doesn't feel meek enough. You could rephrase it here and there and still not change the overall scene/exchange.
TBH, I'm not digging the sensual gaze you went for with the framing here. It feels leering, creepy, and juvenile.
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The reason behind this is that originally I intended this as a very short story, with an unlikable MC who would get his comeuppance. Then, as they say, the story grew in the telling, so I did my very best to try and redeem him. Not sure how well I succeeded, but there it is.
There's a bit more of the creepy and uncomfortable, but it tapers off in what I'm choosing to call a "character arc".
I'm loving this story.It's pacing is great and I don't see many grammatical errors. I think you've got a hidden gem here.
I'm loving this story so much!
I think Pat should sue first for being assaulted.
It's America, he'd win and take Fluttershy.
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Thanks! It was a blast to write and it's nice to hear you're enjoying reading it, too.