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SuperPinkBrony12


I'm a brony and a Pinkie Pie fan but I like all of the mane six, as well as Spike. I hope to provide some entertaining and interesting fanfics for the Brony community.

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(Inspired by and based on this fan comic. Takes place after "School Raze" but before "The Beginning of the End".)

The magic drain has been stopped and Equestria has been saved yet again, but not all is well. For Chancellor Neighsay, he knows there's a role he played in things getting out of control and he's not happy about it.

Determined to restore the EEA's battered reputation, Neighsay does the only thing he can think of and resigns from his position of chancellor. And when he does he's left to wonder what else might be in store for him.

What will happen when the now ex-chancellor decides to make a surprise visit to the place of his greatest failure? And what will he do when he's confronted with a reminder of his past?

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Omg I remember reading that comic I thought that would be an awesome idea and even the young six forgive him which that's so nice

Why couldn’t we have something like this in the show itself?

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Yeah, it would have been better to a moment where he actually held himself to account.

Again, this was a quite well done one-shot. Great job, as usual, on the exchanges, characterizations and general chapter/episode wrap-up. Definitely appreciated Neighsay's chat with the Young Six after he resigned, as well as Twilight's reflection on how well her students have been learning following said chat.

Very much looking forward to more of your work in general.

Comment posted by DecoGalileo deleted Sep 16th, 2021

I have something to say, and that is:

1. It is similar to this comic strip
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2. I ship him with Tempest Shadow
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So in other words, does Neighsay need to find love, or I'm just putting this ship in the bulletin board? 😑

This was a very good one-shot.

I like this considering how he almost ruined twilight school by trying to run his way. Plus almost ruined diplomatic relationships with the kingdom neighbors by accusing the neighbors kids of being villains. And the whole time it was the one they least suspected just because she was a pony. Twilight school might be doing more good in the defeat of racism than she ever planned.

Not to be too picky and it's not really a big deal but maybe you should add the young 6 tag on it just saying

You know perhaps this story would've made an interesting prologue and first act of an episode while the second act leads to Twilight meeting the tree of harmony's avatar. The third act where Twilight converses with her friends about the tree, an epilogue where Queen Chrysalis, Lord Tirek, and Cozy Glow gets summoned by the real Grogar.

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