What's a better way to start off a summer vacation with a slumber party? Nothing of course, but one night Fluttershy finds a heartbroken 3 year old boy while on her way to Pinkie's. With no choice, she decides to take him with her. The other girls all adore him and find out he's not just any normal three year old. He's one with powers! Unfortunaltey because of that, he is being hunted down by evil forces, so the Mane 7 must do everything they can to protect this little one from getting in harms way.
This story is inspired by Goebeltron's story "A Tale of A loving Sister," so there might be some parts where it will seem familiar. You should check him out. His stories are really good.
Chapters (36)
Um, how did they hear the crying? Alleyways aren't usually near regular houses.
I feel disgusted on what's happening to this poor kid.
Plus, this old cliche/trope is being done to death.
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I agree
more plz tell me u will finish it
5 Grand that Rosie is a villain
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You don't think Chaos is one?
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What I meant is the female voice/ surprise villain cliche
Didn’t you write this story before?
Oh yeah on my other accoun but I wanted to do it in a different way
What about applejack?
Is that good or bad?
That sounds awesome af.
For once I agree.
Foreshadowing?
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You can’t?
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What cliche/trope?
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can't what? Apply logic to a story? Yes, I can.
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It's a long topic. I explained later when I have the chance.
But in short summary, this AIN'T the first story nor it will be the last.
That has:
A. Poor little kids having tragic back stories. And they get adopted by one of the Mane Six, or all of them.
B. Lost their parents/families because of that dark past ( Or worse, having terrible and abusive "parents"/"family". That they run well away, and meet the WAY BETTER parenthood from the Mane Six and other MLP Characters. ).
Or C. having super powers within themselves, that a top secret and corrupt government or other evil forces ALWAYS want to kidnapped them and conduct torturing experiments onto those poor little super powered kids for their dark, greedy, and evil F******* UP desires!!!!!!
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That’s not what I meant.
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Really?
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ok. What did you mean?
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You said they couldn’t have heard him cry. Is that true?
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Yes! It's true. You probably haven't read or seen a lot of stories much? But, I do exactly from long ago. And believe me, those tropes are actually happened in some stories ( Despite it being morally disgusting. )
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I think so at least. I mean they mention him being in an alleyway and like I said regular houses in a neighborhood don't have alleyways and in order to even begin to accept that they heard him, he must have been closed by, though even then it's a stretch. Pinkie does live in a regular house, right?
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I probably haven’t.
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I don’t think so, but I could be wrong.
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I know there were multiple rooms shown in rainbow rocks and since Maud was there and not sleeping with the girls there is more than one bedroom. Though, again even if it was an apartment near an alleyway, it's still doubtful they would hear him.
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Why would it still be doubtful?
Should’ve beaten his a** when they had the chance.
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I find it doubtful they would hear someone crying from still a decent distance outside when inside.
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Other account?
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Yeah, you might have a point.
Why tell him that.
Wait, that’s her power?
Ten thousand?
Science magic?
If chaos is gonna bring back up, then they better be good back up.
I want the smoke with chaos.
I feel like so many people made so many mistakes in this chapter.
They don’t think it was the bird?
Wouldn’t it be better if he stayed with rainbow dash, applejack, or twilight?
Telekinesis?
Invisibility? Not bad.
So I guess it was a good and bad thing that he was sent to fluttershy.
The only way I could see them successfully kidnapping berry is plot.
Like they did with sunset?
I wouldn’t mind.
He must be cocky if he thinks that’s possible.
He’s shorter than she is?
That’s what they’re called?
It’s nice to see berry acting like a kid.
What’s that?
Who?
It sounds like Berry can copy and use the girl's powers. Cool if that's true
Jeez, isn’t that going too far?
Why not tell someone?
It’s official. Berry is now op.
Are we gonna see him again?
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It’s either that or he’s connected to the girls somehow.
Anyone else hearing BS?
Kill him off.
Call rainbow dash and tell her to put that super speed to use.
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And tell the rest of the girls to get ready for a serious Dazzling smack down
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Facts.
Yup. Now he gotta die.
What happened?