This story is a sequel to Lunaverse: Galaxy Rangers - The Forbidden Symphony
A Galaxy Ranger story. Season 1 Finale.
It was a nightmare. Trixie couldn’t believe her eyes. Her beloved mentor had transformed into a monster! Luna had declared herself, Nightmare Moon, Eternal Queen of Equestria. Worse, in her madness, she had decided to banish her sister’s sun, bringing upon an Eternal Night that would never end! Now, Trixie and her fellow Galaxy Rangers find themselves in a dying world, battling against a queen whose power seems unbeatable.
Everything is not lost, however. Trixie finds herself new and unexpected allies, but a terrible new foe as well. A familiar face from the past still holds a grudge and won't even die until she's settled the score.
A Lunaverse spinoff story.
Power Ranger copyright of Haim Saban.
Thank you Talon and Thorn for prereading this story.
Nightmare Moon Vector by Remul-Lemlem
Trixie Vector by Hendro107
Background Vector by hunterz263
Updated every Wednesday and Sunday.
I'm not sure but isn't Puissance suppose to be a unicorn and not a pegasus?
Also I have good hunch what she's going to do.
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I doubled checked to make sure, and yes Puissance is a pegasus. Tribes are so hard to remember, aren't they? I actually kinda feel sorry for her in this story. Strokes are hard to deal with evil, or not.
Okay I guess my hunch was right about what would happen with the entire clone afair. But I have no clue where this story is heading next. ^^;
Power Ponies civil war?
Q? Ahh I see what you did there. John Delenci other character he was famous for playing.
Just to let you know. I love how created this mix between power rangers and lunaverse characters. ^^
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Thanks. You're compliment is most appreciated.
Enter the dragon, sorry for the pun.
Ah are we going to see the Kirins? In the lunaverse they have a very powerful nation. With your mention a foreign powers, its their reaction I'm most curious about and of the technology savy Minotaurs are also an interesting thing to withness in the aftermath.
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Not in this story, but it will be something I'll need to consider for the future. But yes, Equestria will have its work cut out to repair its relations with its neighbors and allies.
Are you talking about the Alicorn (goo) Trixie from the shocker verse, or Trixie from lets say the original Lunaverse? I personally hope the Alicorn one I want to see her story continue. But beggars can't be chooser.
Too be honest this story is not your best work. I still think the 1st movie is your better work in that regards. I think the problem is to many plots going on the same time while not given enough time flesh each one out, or the opposite happened, that it dragged on too long. You seem to be your best when you focus on a limited number of main protagonist rather then having so many as was in this story.
I hope this is some helpful critisme, you can use to improve as a writer. ^^
P.S I don't consider this a bad story (it's good) but only one of a lesser quality compared to your previous work.
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Thanks for your critiques. You're right, I had too many plotlines in this story. That's what I get for trying to wrap up everything in a single story. I'll need to do better next time.
As for the movie, the next story will be focusing on Main!Trixie. Unfortunately for her, Shocker isn't through with her yet. Worse, unlike Ranger!Trixie, this Trixie doesn't have any powers, and Sol Shocker is ruthless as ever! It's a fight for survival against monsters she can't possibility defeat. When this story is finished with, then I will be writing a story about Kamen Rider Lux and Goo!Trixie. Sorry for the delay, but this is one plotline I've been itching to write about.
Trixieproof? No such thing. Like there being too many Pinkie Pie
Congrats Spike.
Final boss already?
Gaaaaaaaa
I'm in suspense!
Respect to Lemon.
She's a real homie.
Into the Belly of the Beast
Awesome story!
while not your best work this still ticks alot i personally tend to look for in fanfiction, welp off to the movies as it were