10962873 I think that maybe you should right two different endings to this story. One that shows Big Mac being corrupted by the Saddle Arabian's influences and take Apple Jack back as a slave, along with some other girls that attracted his attention... The other ending shows that he will try to fix apple jacks problem when they get home. Either way its up to you. Also,"just a suggestion" if you go for the first option can i recommend that you make sequel to this story. One that shows either Big Mac seducing the other mares and teaching other stallions to act like the Saddle Arabian's or shows that Apple Jack had gotten hocked on to this pleasure and decides to share it with here friend's?
11003952 The commissioner has given me a full outline of the story he wants me to write, so the ending is already determined. I hope everyone enjoys the story as it unfolds, regardless of what it brings.
I wanted to make a comment on Mac being corrupted and spreading this to Equestria, but all I could think of is him wearing the bridle now. I wonder would it make him submissive and breedable?
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Fellowing
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What breed is that horse
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are you talking about the picture in my Profile?
Percheron , used to be used by knights, work horse, weigh up to 2500 pounds. Big!
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I think that maybe you should right two different endings to this story.
One that shows Big Mac being corrupted by the Saddle Arabian's influences and take Apple Jack back as a slave, along with some other girls that attracted his attention...
The other ending shows that he will try to fix apple jacks problem when they get home.
Either way its up to you.
Also,"just a suggestion" if you go for the first option can i recommend that you make sequel to this story.
One that shows either Big Mac seducing the other mares and teaching other stallions to act like the Saddle Arabian's or shows that Apple Jack had gotten hocked on to this pleasure and decides to share it with here friend's?
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The commissioner has given me a full outline of the story he wants me to write, so the ending is already determined. I hope everyone enjoys the story as it unfolds, regardless of what it brings.
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Still i love to see a Sequel
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Well then you can commission it
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I would if i had an idea as to the price and fave the funds...
Also i will need time to sumerize the story first...
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Just ask lol
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Nice rode one of them when I was 6 good times lol
I wanted to make a comment on Mac being corrupted and spreading this to Equestria, but all I could think of is him wearing the bridle now. I wonder would it make him submissive and breedable?
I am liking this so far. Can't wait to see where it goes from here.