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TheCrimsonDM


Big fan of fantasy and lesbians. If you want magic, lesbians, or ponies, you've come to the right place. Follow me itch.io if you want to see my visual novels. https://thecrimsondm-vanillia.itch.io/

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Oh frick you did it. Ok, legitimately, how smutty? I honestly have no problem with smut but ponies isn't where I usually go for smut. Although I definitely trust you're writing, so I think it's make an exception either way.

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Basically I just won't be fading to black. And the jokes may get a little or a lot more crazy

A lot crazy is enough incentive for me:trollestia:

To paraphrase one of my favorite movies: "you did it, you crazy son of a bitch, you did it."

I am so glad that you decided to do this. I loved the first story, but it was also a massive cockblock lol. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

I like how we got this made. This is in fact nice

Haha. Nice. I also now realized that this is gonna be the same story but this version will have the sexy times.

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sexy times, and some much more dirty jokes. Or light swearing where appropiate/funny

Ah yes. The glory of face sitting. Nice indeed. I also enjoy the part with rainbow. She wants to feel loved but is scared. We must give her twilight's mind and maybe a bit of pinkie for the fun.








Add long tongues

OK, that's not just not cutting away at the last second, that was a straight up flashing back to the naughty bits that were previously skipped. Not bad though. I have to wonder if there's going to be flash backs to all the wedding night activities. I must say I'm actually curious as to how it went for those who only just recently lost their virginity.

Another identical chapter, but that's no big deal. Honestly though, does tacking silly on the front really provide enough cover for censorship. I've always thought censorship guidelines were fascinatingly, and frustratingly, arbitrary.

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eh, it's not just about censorship. It's more like Locoweed from West of Loathing, or the stuff they smoke in the hobbit. It's basically pot, but usually has some cooky side effect. in this case, rainbow smoke.

But don't worry, soon enough there will be another chapter that's got a lot more juicy details.

Honestly the breakfast scene was amazing and somehow I still sharply exhale air through my nose when I read 'sillyweed', it's ridiculous and I'm a little bit disappointed in myself.

smoking sillyweed with a superbong, fucking hell... :pinkiecrazy:

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Thank you. I totally didn't steal the idea of Locoweed from West of Loathing. Sillyweed is one hundred percent original and lit.

First. Nice

Next. Alicorns can't die normally right? So can twilight really drown?

nice work on chapters for both stories:twilightsmile:

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it's kinda like Deadpool rules. Oh she can't 'die' but it would be a rather awful experience. Heck, Celestia has probably been ripped in half by a Juggernaut before.

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I now want you to go over this event and have celestia say just that. Because it is fucking funny. "He even said I'm the juggernaut bitch. Which I found very rude truth be told. He was already ripping me limb from limb you don't need to be mean about it"

Of course Fluttershy blames herself. :facehoof: Anyway, couple minor errors I saw.

This was a moment for rarity and Fluttershy, the...

Rarity's name should be capitalized. :raritycry:,

...Fluttershy would wraith beneath her...

I think you mean writhe. Despite how quiet Flutters is, she's no ghost. :fluttercry:

She kept her composer, making sure...

I'm sure Rarity makes dresses, not music. :rainbowhuh::rainbowlaugh:

This is where we find out pinkie is God. Or just the reincarnation of Luna and celestia's mom that came down just to fuck with ponies

Applejack watched her for a moment before asking, "Pinkie, did you just walk on water?"

"Of course not silly, nopony can just walk on water."

You can only walk on water if it would be funny to deny doing it after someone who saw it asked if you did.

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now if I were writing this, I'd have a flash cut to Jeebus pulling a claw hammer out of his hair that he kept there for "just such an occasion"

Fluttershy took in a deep breath, then exhaled. In a very controlled, and clam tone of voice she replied, "No, Twilight. I am not going to cheat on you with an animal."

Good thing Twilight didn't notice this freudian slip :yay:

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