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Did he do a rewrite of the first few chapters or did re upload them ?
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No Clue as I am new to this story but so far I like this.
Not gonna lie the first bit is extremely off-putting, to the point of almost dropping this before I really start it. I'm going to read a few more chapters and hope it gets better, but as a whole the first segment of this chapter does not really work well as a "hook" in my eyes.