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"You think you know me..."

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It's the big wedding between Princess Twilight Sparkle and future Prince Flash Sentry, and everyone in Equestria is excited. Captain Flash Magnus of the Royal Guard is very happy to see his decedent marrying the girl of his dreams, but he cannot wish that he was in his place. Long ago, Flash Magnus had fallen in love with Somnambula, but discovered she loved another and kept his feelings a secret. With the wedding almost here, Magnus wonders if there is a second chance for them and soon finds out his answer upon meeing Somnambula the evening before the wedding.

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Great job with this story.

I think Flash Magnus and Somnambula are a popular ship, so I am a bit surprised there are not more stories of them together. But this was a really heartfelt tale of the two discovering they both have feelings for each other after remaining quiet for so long.

Some of the teases for other pairings were funny, like Celestia and Thorax. I think weddings are a good place for romance to blossom, and not just between the ones getting married.

Don't really like the inclusion of blatant sex talks in a T rated shipping fic. I mean, I have no problem with clop, but this one is not outright clop, yet it's not a clean one either. It's just weird.

Perhaps it was the wedding, but it seemed that Magnus and Somnambula were not the only ones experiencing new feelings of love. Nearby he saw Headmistress Starlight Glimmer dancing very close to her fillyhood friend Sunburst while next to them were the new Elements, Gallus and Silverstream, dancing side by side and shaking their rumps to the music. And they were doing their best to hide the fact they were staring at said rumps. Princess Cadence and Shining Armor were nuzzling each other affectionately, but this might have been because the Princess was pregnant again. Little Flurry Heart was still letting anyone nearby know that she would be a big sister soon. Others were more subtle, like how Applejack was doing her best to hide her bush as Rarity was complimenting her on the dress she was wearing, but the unicorn was unable to see it. And some threw subtly out the window like a drunk Princess Celestia making out with King Thorax in the corner while his brother looked embarrassed.

So many shipping's around in this story and I agree with them so much 😍🥰
And by the way you kind of forgot to put an L on the word blush just to give you a little heads-up

Ok this was a pretty cute story although I'm not a big fan of the sex part but the romance is pretty good so everybody is preparing for Twilight and Flash wedding and Flash Magnus is happy for his nephew but sometimes he really wish he will find somebody he truly loves and apparently he fell in love with Somnambula which she thought that she was already with somebody he didn't want to ruin their friendship between them and basically it was driving him crazy but it looks like Somnambula saw him pretty upset and they wanted to talk about it basically everything was pretty much a miscommunication with each other but the one thing is they both have feelings for each other and it looks like they sealed it with a kiss which that's pretty sweet and yes I also ship with these two as well anyway this was a pretty good story keep up the good work

"Although it was embarrassing to learn how to use a toilet, which every foal today learned at age two or three."
LMAO, this is so funny but yet also makes sense at the same time. It actually reminds me that Magnus had been away for generations. Nice job !

I loved it, was a cute story and I laughed at the comedy during the wedding. Also, I’m pretty sure I wasn’t the only one who thought about this song during the bedroom part 😏

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