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My favorite characters are Sunset Shimmer and Twilight sparkle. I like writing Anon A Miss stories.

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Bet god,will find out he not in he’ll and he will be piss

Trust me, he won't.

And plot twist...

It was Kalaziel's mother the goddess of creation who actually tried to prolong a human life.

She secretly always hated him, but loved Michael and Remiel more.

Great start! A perfect way to show the ignorance of higher beings, love it.


This story was inspired by Lucifer, a wonderful funny and enjoyable TV show.

I have to do it. I'm so sorry.


I love how God was given a wife in this. I find it a little strange that this angel didn’t fall with Lucifer or Satan since he went against God. Im assuming this is sometime during the modern era?
Anyway, the story looks good so far. Can’t wait to see how ponies will react to seeing a fallen angel.

good job and good plot

Kalaziel's fall takes place many millenia after Samael/Lucifer's fall from Heaven.

And yes, during the modern era.

Originally, Kalaziel was meant to end up in Los Angeles and work alongside Detective Chloe Decker and Lucifer, his brother.

And God's wife is the Goddess of all creation. Her human Alias is Charlotte Richards.

Also, this story takes place right after Lucifer Season 5B episode 16 and MLP FIM Season 3 episode 13.

Leading a rebellion soon? Or perhaps turning into a demon?

No, neither.

He won't follow in Lucifer's steps.

Goddess will be arriving soon.

Eventually Lucifer cameo.

Then Amenadiel.

Then Jophiel and Remiel, his big sisters.

And then God will come down.

Bro you should take your time an make the story longer, trust me it will make lot more fun for you and longer for your reeders.

awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

I love the story sow FRA I can't wait for the next chapter thank you

And the moral of this story, never anger an evil god.

The Monk

Ah, the Fable: The truth of the two laws. There is one law for the masses and a different, more lenient law for the privileged.

The average schmuck gets the death sentence for trying to help people.
While the privileged psychopath who violently beat someone and broke bones, simply gets a slap on the wrist. Oh, such a naughty boy ...

This ancient saying from true alchemy surely fits this scenario.

"As above, So below." - First written on the emerald tablet by The real life alchemist Hermes Trismegistus The founder of real world alchemy who died around 1320 years ago. Unlike magic, alchemy was a real thing and the grandfather of chemistry.


awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Why not turn into a Alicorn? I’m sure Lucifer will laugh his head off.

“Kalaziel, one of God's most beloved sons“

It’s been a while since my last theology class but I don’t recognize the name.

Allow me to explain.

Kalaziel is my OC angel

Kalaziel is also Cadence's father and Princess Amore is Cadance's mother but both of them had their memories removed by God.

nice work on the chapter and its nice to see a update from you:twilightsmile:

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