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FanofAwesomeness


I am the guy who writes the Equestrian-Marvel Universe. If you don't know what that is, take a look at The Iron Mare. Oh, and I write other things.

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Sometimes you shouldn't go digging in your past. Sometimes you should just follow your heart. after recieving a strange letter, Rainbow Dash tries to figure out how she knows who sent it. the hoofwriting seems all too familiar and they sure do know a lot about her.
After a confrontation, Nightwolf decides to go live towards the outer edge of town where he can protect them from the hidden traitor. Chrysalis is hiding and is going to attempt to conquer the town, and eventually, the entire country if he doesn't stop her. But what are the concequences for a single mistake? And who is really the Queen? And what's all this about Rainbow Dash's brother?

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Constructive criticsm gladly accepted.

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If you draw ponies, it would be greatly appreciated if you could draw Nightwolf.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 30 )

Interesting, especially with characters tag, gonna see how it will roll

drat, I like were this is going... looks like my "to read" list just went up to 39....
I don't like that thing to ever go past 20 and its one away from double that!....

Intriguing......very intreguing:pinkiecrazy:

Er ma gerd! Very intriuging. Take. A fav and 2 mustaches:moustache::moustache::pinkiecrazy::derpytongue2:

Hmmm.... shows much promise! :moustache::moustache::moustache::rainbowhuh:

1261404 Thanks. It's my first fic out here so when I'm done, if you have any critique please share it. I would like to improve my writing some.

Besides a couple of spelling errors, really good. I like the back story, and i cant wait for more! Good job bro:pinkiecrazy:

1265558 Thanks. And spelling isn't my strongest area. But there are a few spelling things that may look like mistakes when they are just weird spells in different languages.

1265997 i dont know, i saw a word that looked like about, but was spelled abot? I dont know, but good job...!:pinkiecrazy::yay:

1266042 Of course there are some that are just errors. Where did you find that?

1266060 i think it was in the 2nd chapter....i could be wrong though, an easy way to check. Is ccopy and paste into a word document and itll check for you...:pinkiecrazy:

1266105 Thanks. I'm kinda just posting as I finish the chapters.

Dude this is a good background story of night wolf. didn't know that you would do that to twilight at the fight but its so awsome tell me when we are going to do the main story cause i have to do the Crafter back story.:rainbowdetermined2:

1266566 Awesomeness:rainbowdetermined2:
1266883 The main story is in the next few chapters.

1276233 Lol:rainbowlaugh:. Everything will be revealed soon enough. Or at least a few things will be.

It better be revealed!:rainbowlaugh:1276469 very good vey good! Cant wait for more!:pinkiecrazy::derpytongue2::eeyup:

It's getting a bit clear on what your heading in to this man, i'll keep looking for more chapters.:moustache:

1280758 Just wait to see once I'm done. Then look for part 2.
1280878 There are only 2 chapters left in this part. Wait for part 2.

Man this is very good I can't wait for the last one!:yay:

Very good! Very good! Only one thing. Though, just a couple of spelling errors, nothing big.....mostly just missing a letter or no puttin a space....other than that, ccant wait for more:pinkiecrazy::derpytongue2::rainbowdetermined2::eeyup::yay::pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy:

1304697 I know. I have editing to do. My horrible keyboard doesn't help.:rainbowdetermined2:

1304707 yea, terrible keyboards and typing shouldnt mix:rainbowlaugh:

1304723:rainbowlaugh: Nice. Finished chapter 7. At exactly 8:00 U.S. eastern time, I'm releasing it. Prepare yourself.

Er mea gerd!!!!!! cool story bro:rainbowlaugh::pinkiecrazy::derpytongue2: cant wait for more...

1304944 Well part 2 might not come out for a few days. But it will come out soon.:rainbowdetermined2:

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