Twilight finds a new spell in an old tome of Starswirl's, and decides to give it a shot. Her friends convince her to let them be her test subjects. But when it works too well, will she be able to reverse the effect? And will her relationship with her friends survive the trials ahead?
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I like it! Keep going please.
I like where this is going, and you have a very good writing style, but the "Spike-distracts-Twilight-when-she's-doing-a-spell-and-leads-to-catastrophe" idea has been done to death. If you can compensate that with a great storyline, I'll be more than happy to fave this, but for now it's a bit unoriginal for my tastes.
CLIIIIIIIIFFFFFFFFHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAANNNNNGGGGGEEEEEERRRRR!
Hmmmm.....mhmm, mhmm...this requires 'MOAR'
Also----> "Oh, Faust!"
Your spacing makes the reading difficult.
I live! I'm currently in Colorado in the middle of our road trip - we're going to be taking the scenic route home. Which, unfortunately, means I'll be another couple days without internet.
I just had to log on for a couple hours to get my FIM fix.
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I will most certainly put up some more chapters, after the road trip. And between college classes.
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You like my writing? Thanks. But i wouldn't exactly say catastrophe, more like hilarious hi-jinks until she can find a counter spell.
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I'm sorry...
Too much? Too little? What could I do to fix it for you? (Hey, that rhymed! Where's a zecora emotocon when you need one?)
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Did I do it right?
Too much spacing