Today was supposed to be the wedding between Shining Armor and Princess Cadance. Everything was going fine at first.
Then Queen Chrysalis managed to beat them.
With the Elements of Harmony indisposed of, Luna must recruit six new ponies to stop them.
Tepid Waters, a professional swimmer who can't be without friends.
Ollie, a brash stunt pony with a knack for skateboarding.
Cupcake Foil, a non-binary party planner with a drinking problem.
Icarus, a pyrotechnician with a pet moth and a secret.
Morning Dream, a half-blind botanist from Fillydelphia with an affinity for tea.
And Lavender Burst, Morning Dream's teenage daughter and apprentice.
Can these six unlikely friends band together to save the day in the Elements' absence?
Warning: Contains alcohol.
Feedback is appreciated; after all, I'm still a learning writer.
Keep up the good work
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Thank you; I certainly will try!
This is what everypony gets for not listening to Twilight at the rehearsal. If they listened to her, they could have stopped Chrysalis.
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To be fair to the others, she never gave any real evidence; she just ran into the room shouting "Cadance is evil!"
But yes, they should've at least taken into consideration what the pony who's known Cadance for most (if not all) of her life is saying.
That's not the real Luna at the door is it?
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Maybe so, but the mane 5 and Spike promised to take Twilight's concerns seriously in the lesson they dubbed as Lesson Zero. And at the rehearsal, they broke that promise.
Keep up the great work.