Here’s hoping Shining is not left in the dust by both Cadance and Chrysalis, as both mares seem to have more chemistry with each other than with Shining
This is rather true to life in the sense that, when you have sex with your roommate it becomes a whole hell of a lot easier to not be annoyed by each other's bullshit.
Twilight was definitely jealous of Cadance. I think you should better reveal these feelings in the story. It is often difficult for an aspiring writer to fully reveal a character. Therefore, you can find out more info about things like greed and envy, in Arthur Miller's The Crucible free essay example. This is a wonderful play in which the author revealed the negative sides of his characters as deeply and clearly as possible. I strive to achieve this level in my stories and recommend it to everyone.
Here’s hoping Shining is not left in the dust by both Cadance and Chrysalis, as both mares seem to have more chemistry with each other than with Shining
I was honestly thinking that we weren’t going to get more of this.
This is rather true to life in the sense that, when you have sex with your roommate it becomes a whole hell of a lot easier to not be annoyed by each other's bullshit.
Halfway through the chapter
"JUST BUCK ALREADY!"
Oh they did
Twilight was definitely jealous of Cadance. I think you should better reveal these feelings in the story. It is often difficult for an aspiring writer to fully reveal a character. Therefore, you can find out more info about things like greed and envy, in Arthur Miller's The Crucible free essay example. This is a wonderful play in which the author revealed the negative sides of his characters as deeply and clearly as possible. I strive to achieve this level in my stories and recommend it to everyone.