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Forget the Words and Sing Along! | (Commissions)

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This story is a sequel to Please Love Me?


Decades change within a blink. The banishment of a sister, the loss of a student, has caused Princess Celestia to be distant when it comes to family. However, a baby dragon burns through her defence... but her past failures cause her to let go.


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Momlestia is best celestia

link4 #2 · July 27th · · 3 ·

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only saying that cause u spike.

i ike momma twilight.

This was good hearty soup!

CaioCoia #4 · July 27th · · 1 ·

isn't that a prequel?

Does that mean spike has 3 moms? Twilight sparkle, twilight velvet, and celestia?

sejox #6 · July 27th · · 1 ·

haven't read from you, or anything on this site, for more than a year now.

It's good to see that the spark in your writings is still there and that your description of events and feelings has become better and... closer? maybe I'm just projecting myself, maybe that's what you wanted, and if that's the case then congrats <3

Octoskan #7 · July 27th · · 1 ·

Excellent story, very sweet and touching. Second person usage was very nice as well.

B_25 #8 · July 27th · · 1 ·

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I don't usually write in the second person, so whoo-hooo!

DarkDMan #9 · July 27th · · 1 ·

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The first part of this story was more like a memory to give context to the end of the story, which is the present. Giving a little explanation as to why, Celestia, wants to love, Spike, like a mom.:twilightsmile:
Well gone sir.:moustache:

But now that you have put these 2 delicious meals on our plates. I can't help but feel there's another dish on the way, or maybe a fine dessert to end this feast for the heart, hmmm?!:trixieshiftright:

Whatever you choose, this was a great read.
Thanks for your time, and efforts!:moustache::trollestia::heart:

And THANK YOU, CategoricalGrant, for getting the ball rolling!:pinkiehappy:

Also, LOVE the pic chooses!:pinkiehappy:

Stet709 #11 · July 27th · · 1 ·

Once again, love Celestia as a mom.
Excellent work!

jw278 #12 · July 27th · · 1 ·

Nice little follow up, I like how you showed how Celestia saw it all before she spoke to Spike then had that little bit at the end with the letter. I'd love to see another story of maybe them being more relaxed or maybe being more open about it all with each other or around others, Maybe having it come out to Spike's friends around mother daughter day sort of thing, I don't know lol But either way great story, really liked it, thanks for writing it :pinkiehappy: Keep up the great work :twilightsmile:

B_25 #13 · July 27th · · 1 ·

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Thanks for the kindness, old friend!

Hope the world isn't tearing you too bad out there!
~ Yr. Fellow Spike Fan, B

RDT
RDT #14 · July 28th · · 1 ·

Read both stories. I liked the different uses of second person across the two stories and the contrast it provides. (I had expected the letter to slowly become blurrier/less clear using some formatting tricks once I saw that Celestia was crying.) Overall nice pair of stories.

The deep dynamic of Celestia and Spike having a mother/son relationship carries so much power with it. The regal princess who all adore and feel is above common tasks, and the little dragon who struggles to be accepted among ponies, yet these two find a solace together. Such is the power of Family.

Excellent work.

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