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ObabScribbler


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Starting a new school in a new country is difficult but nothing Octavia can't handle. That is, if she could just stop crushing on that silent girl in the sunglasses ...

A collaboratively written story from the Interfic Forum. Want to see how it continues? Come and join us in writing the next part!

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Comments ( 13 )

Students there wore their own clothes, took electives, emphasized sports to an alarming degree and had a cheerleading squad un by (presumably) a catty Head Cheerleader in a ponytail and pouty lipstick.

Does it mean "run" not "un"

Octavia seeing Vinyl is love at first sight.

This is very interesting so far Scribbler. I like where it's going.

This sounds really good. Keep up the good work. Octavia and Vinyl Scratch forever.

This is really good. I would never imagine Octavia as a shy girl but this works out well. I love it. RD is vulgar as fuck, and that honestly fits her well. Can't wait for more of this. Keep up the good work pal

Lol the way you wrote Rainbow Dash's character in this story makes me want to punt her across the country. The fact that a character actually makes me angry just shows y'all know how to write! I'm really enjoying this so far!

Pretty cute so far. :)

Very well written. I'm liking the story so far.

This is great.

Rainbow is a knock out, being so wonderfully insensitive.

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I personally find her hilarious.

Comment posted by inxinfate deleted Oct 9th, 2021

This is very cute so far. I feel like Rainbow Dash is more abrasive than normal here, but it's a perfectly fine portrayal regardless.
I'll be keeping an eye on it :twilightsmile:

I hope this story gets continued as it has potential, and I feel bad for Vinyl not actually being able to speak, taking her mute reputation literally, but it's also quite a unique change as I also prefer the idea of her being mute.

I also feel bad for Octavia in this story, as in some I've seen she's a little bit of a dick to Vinyl, but this version should be more interesting.

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