nice work

"I already told you," Twilight said grabbing a bowl of peas. "It was taken from me on the first day. The last time, I saw it was in the lab of my counterpart."

"I was with her," Sugarcoat said. "All of our stuff is in the Twilight pony's lab. The ponies are trying to reverse engineer it. Pony Twilight had a bunch of us in her lab explaining how our electronics work to her and two the counterparts of the Flim Flam brothers or sisters in this world." (1)

"She's having me work with her to figure out how to open a portal back home," Twilight said.

If the futa freaks even frickin try to go to our world again.

I really want ALL of our military to slaughter these disgusting raping monsters!!!!!!!!

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Fully agreed on all the comments here.

Damn poor rainbow but I honestly hope that they hook up with wallflower in order to plan properly

Damn poor Twilight I honestly hope that they forgive her soon because you don't understand it was an accident

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I highly doubt that "forgiveness" is even a option for a long, long time.

Accident or not. Twilight condemned them all to literally raping hell for ETERNITY.

Only Wallflower is the only tiny hope to somehow save them all, and escape.

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im hoping that twilight ends up using her device again but insted of teleporting them it insted changes all the humans into ponies and ponies into humans. You know the kinda thing that would make the ponies suddenly very aware of what they had actualy done

I would like to see what happened to rainbow dash, a flashback of her failed escape in the next chapter.

How much is missing from the story? I feel that little is missing.

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True forgiveness is probably a long ways away but I still feel like the fact that it was an accident and also the fact that she's trying to fix this it should play a factor and also you have to consider the fact that she is condemned alongside with them so considering all of that I still want her to be forgiven and besides her and wallflower are there best chances of getting out of there

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It's very poetic and karma for the ponies. Get a taste of their own frickin medicine.