Following a dare from Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo discovers she has a passion for writing. The only problem is, well, it's really bad.
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Warning! False advertising! It's actually not that bad for a short thing. (that's what she said)
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Predator Status: Caught.
Judging by the title and the description, I thought the story was gonna be about Sweetie Belle showing Scootaloo a bad fan-fiction that she wrote.
Sweetie Belle: Like my story, Scoots?
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Scootaloo: Nom, nom.
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Then I read "'No,” Sweetie belle said, moving closer. “I want to show you something.” Her horn began to glow", and I expected Sweetie Belle to shove her horn in Scootaloo's mouth.
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Yeeeee-aaaaah. All in all, a completely alright, non-objectionable, average story.
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Haha, I had that expectation too.
“I want to show you something.” Her horn began to glow" - i had that ' And Then They Bucked!' moment...
I need a brainwash
Wow what a cute and well written story good job! are you gonna make a continuation the story was really good?
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I thought the story was gonna be about Sweetie Belle showing Scootaloo a bad fan-fiction that she wrote.
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I knew it was missing something. Let's see if we can fix that, shall we?
Touching. There's a new group, the Scootabelle Empire, for anypony who is interested.
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Sweetie: "It's a story about two, um... colts! Named Scooter Lord and... Sweetie Bro! And it's about how they both discover something unexpected, but wonderful about themselves."
Scoots: "Meh. Does it have any explosions?"
Sweetie: "Well, um, no..."
Scoots: "Meh."
Hmm, it's a little rushed and awkwardly written, and I don't really like the angst. It was cute though! I love the idea of Sweetie Belle using levitation magic on Scoots to help her fly.
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heh, don't worry: It's not finished
Spoilers, though. One of the CMC's wrote it.
not to bad for such a short story, yet its still a bit to rushed. Its still good though, i like it
beautifully self-aware