A Ponytones Affaire

MA Ponytones Dinner
MLP: FiM
Romance
Slice of Life
Porn
After a particularly busy day, Rarity and the rest of the Ponytones decide to have dinner together. However, Toe-Tapper and Torch Song want the evening to be more than just a chat between friends.
Sex
Fetish
Anthro
Rarity
Big Mac
Hyperstorm_h · 8.5k words · 61 5 · 2.5k views

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Donttouchmysqueenus

Donttouchmysqueenus #1 · Jul 14th, 2021 · 2 · ·

Nice to see you branching out to writing.

Hyperstorm_h

Hyperstorm_h #2 · Jul 14th, 2021 · · ·

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Thank you! I have more ideas roaming on my brain. I'll try to take some time to write them down

Donttouchmysqueenus

Donttouchmysqueenus #3 · Jul 14th, 2021 · 1 · ·

10900056
Awsome to hear, I look forward to seeing them.

concordion

concordion #4 · Jul 14th, 2021 · 1 · ·

This was very good and fun! Edit: and very well written. I didn't guess for a second that English was a second language.

Hyperstorm_h

Hyperstorm_h #5 · Jul 14th, 2021 · · ·

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English is not my mother language, so the original fic was written in Spanish and then used Google Translator to translate it. Spanish can omit the pronouns in phrases if they're implicit enough, so the translator sometimes uses the wrong gender on them. I already corrected a lot of them, but I guess there were some that went under my radar.

I think I'll do a quick rundown again and try to correct those.

Thanks for letting me know

n1god

n1god #6 · Jul 14th, 2021 · 1 · 1 ·

First of all, I must say that I am not someone who speaks English, I am actually from Mexico, in any case, I am sorry if there are spelling or dramatic mistakes.

That said, my good friend Hyperstorm, I must say that I have been following your work for years, and honestly, as you said, some of the works that I found yours, had mini stories, of which they had these same fetishes.

It is worth mentioning that the story that you have elaborated enchanted me, from the concept and even your own "signature" in the story, highlighting your liking for the Hyper. I must also say that the plot is not complicated, easy for me to understand and especially going to the main point. Which both are appreciated because from the beginning it is made clear what will happen, but without neglecting the events that make Rarity and Big Mac enter that situation that I must also say was very funny.

I really hope to see future work from you, because if this was your first story, I really want to see what else you have prepared for the rest of us.

Thank you very much for the story and a good job: D

PS: I would appreciate very much if you keep that simple writing, my English is not very good yet XD.

n1god

n1god #7 · Jul 14th, 2021 · · ·

Hora, no sabia que escribias en español pero que agradable saber que tu tambien escribes historias. Por si te interesa leer algo mio, no lo encontraras aqui si no en Fanfiction.net. Buscame como n1god. las ultimas dos historias, son directamente de sexo.

Hyperstorm_h

Hyperstorm_h #8 · Jul 14th, 2021 · · ·

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Already did a rundown and corrected a lot of gender mistakes and changed some expressions here and there to make it look more natural. Thanks again!

10900320
I really appreciate yours words, my guy

This is actually not my first fic; but it's the first one I liked enough to translate it to English. Maybe I could do the same with the rest, but I want to rewrite several parts on them before. Anyways, you can expect more stuff from me soon

10900321
No estoy muy seguro, pero creo que tu nombre me suena y puede que haya leido algún fic tuyo en fanfiction. Creo, ¿eh? No estoy muy seguro ahora

n1god

n1god #9 · Jul 14th, 2021 · · ·

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Bueno, en lo que respecta al Fanfiction.net, ahi soy conocido porque actualmente yo he sido el unico escritor que no ha habandonado sus historias y las tengo relativamente bien actualizadas y sobre todo, toco temas de HIE que muchos no se atreven, que es el realismo, muchos cometen el Error de dejar el fic a medio empezar y sobre todo el mayor error de hacer de su personaje un Gary stud, con un harem con las princes etc. errores de novatos, y tengo otro fic, que muchos Alfas en Fanfiction me prohibieron poner, pero que puedes leer en Foroz DZ.

Llamado "The futanari is magic" te imaginaras por que XD

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