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Thinking: These are my thoughts. As you read this, my thoughts become your thoughts. My thoughts are who I am. You become me.//Talking: Hunh.


(Cover art by Burnin-Dove [DeviantArt] G-Elric [Derpibooru])

What’s a few marks left by a friend?

Well, it all depends on what kind of marks, as far as Gallus is concerned.

Unfortunately, Smolder thinks this is hilarious.

So pucker up, bird-boy.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 29 )

Hey good to see you making stories again although I was kind of hoping the other ones are finished but okay I guess anyway this story is actually pretty interesting so far so it looks like smolder is starting to open up a little bit more to her friends not just Ocellus which is very nice to see and they been doing a secret hangout tea party together but then few days past she wanted to see if she can wear like more feminine clothes or jewels or whatever and mostly makeup she start off with a lipstick and Gallus starting to notice it and that got smolder attention so after class they talk about what happened at the cafeteria and how gallus never seen lipstick before because mostly for any creature with beaks do not have lips so it give smolder an idea she laid in and gave Gallus a kiss on the cheek which that's cute and leaving him shocked and disbelief well that should be very interesting situation can't wait to see how this goes

Well that's just adorable :ajsmug: I'm so following this

Well...this ought to be interesting. :trixieshiftleft:

Poor Gallus has dragon cooties now. :pinkiegasp:

"Lucrative" means "profitable," not "wealthy."

You have no idea how much I relate to dressing up in girly outfits in secret, then carefully experimenting with wearing a single feminine accessory in public. Or, for that matter, being unhealthily obsessed with lipstick. I am enjoying the hell out of this story for all the wrong reasons--as well as the right ones. Great stuff.

Gallus swore he could actually see a little cartoon pair of pink lips fly out of her hand and go straight towards him. He knew it was only his overactive imagination, but it still took a lot of his willpower not to physically dodge the flying kiss.

Lol classic cartoon

Well that was a very interesting chapter and cute too so gallus was having a hard time sleeping thinking about smolder did he doesn't know if he likes it or dislike it but somehow he keeps on thinking about it so at the cafeteria the Others talk to each other and smolder got the idea to have a tea party which the other has agreed to it and this would help gallus out of his mind so tonight hit and the boys finally made it to smolder and Ocellus room and then later that night they decided to go because it's getting late gallus was about to leave until smolder stop asking him does this help from last night and it did I guess that's another way for sorry for last night when he was about to leave smolder kiss him on the check again but this time she didn't laugh it's that it was kind of like a shy kiss or something like that but that doesn't stop him being shocked what just happened again I wondered that she feels something for him I guess we'll find out next time

I just wanna eat this story up :duck: sweet like a Cinnabon

This story is amazing:rainbowlaugh: I love it!!

Possibly better than usual dragon courtship?

I hear that requires massive gouts of flame, lots of boasting and an immense amount of property damage. Or, was that Yak courtship..? Minus the flames, of course. Hm. Now there's a story idea, Smolder and Yona bonding over their respective species' ideas of romantic chivalry and how much destruction is involved.

Haha great book(sry idk how to compliment)

Well then things are getting weird at least for gallus so Smolder has been kissing 💋 him a couple of times I wonder if she really have feelings for him guess we'll find out next time

Gallus really needs to talk this over with Smolder.

“So are you and Smolder, like, dating?”


To be totally honest...I'm not sure Smolder knows either.

I mean, as Gallus has already proven, it's sort of hard to tell at the moment...but part of me is thinking she's still doing this to mostly just tease Gallus, and hasn't stopped to think of the full ramifications as of yet either...though surely she's let her brain go in that direction at least once by now. Might be why she's still doing it--she likes seeing how much it's short-circuiting Gallus and now she's curious as to how long she can milk it. :rainbowlaugh:

Of course, it'd help if somebody would just sit down and talk it out with the other already. :trollestia:

She's marking her territory so she can decide later. :moustache:

nice to see you're back to writing
but uh
could we get an update to The More Things Change...?

Silverstream once kissed him on the cheek, though she had been in a real good mood that day and pretty much kissed all of their friends on the cheek. That was just Silverstream being Silverstream.

If I'm going to be honest I ship gallus and silverstream so much 😅

“Dragon… courtship?” Ocellus echoed dryly, raising an eyebrow. The slightest smirk tugged at the corner of her mouth. “Now why in Equestria would you want to know about that, I wonder?”

I felt like Ocellus she knows what's going on a little because she can sense it the emotion From gallus

Well then that was pretty cute story so it looks like gallus really wanted to find out the answers why is smolder acting like that and giving him a kiss and he asked one of his friend Ocellus since she knows her better and probably her culture and what kind of information she said is basically smolder is marking him except for not breathing fire on him 😅 but Gallus finally got the answer and it's time for him to confront smolder so he found her both of them were talking about how the kiss was and he told her that he liked it and why was she doing this but it looks like Ocellus theory was correct because smolder is in love with Gallus and he admitted that he also in love with her as well and it looks like it's official between both of them that they are both boyfriend and girlfriend which I think that is so cute and she planted a lot of kisses on him lol anyway this was a pretty good story hopefully we get to see your other stories but until then keep up the good work

I loved the way you wrote this story! I’ve always shipped Smolder and Gallus and the way you wrote them was amazing! Can’t wait to see more!!

This would make a good cover for this story XD


Gallus took in a breath, held it, then slowly exhaled. “I need to talk to Smolder.”

Darn right you do! :trixieshiftleft:

Everyday should be a lipstick day.

There do seem to be some good perks from it. :ajsmug:

This was a nice light little shipfic, the sort that feels like a nice light candy snack while out for a walk on a nice day. :pinkiehappy: And the fact that it's Smollus just seals the deal for me, as it's no secret now that this is the one ship I'm most pro for. :raritywink:

Heh, yeah, that would make for a good cover, though I hope if the author chooses to do that, they credit the artist in the process (rather fond of said artist's work myself, see).

If anyone knows how I can get in touch with the original artist so I can ask permission, this could definitely be a good cover pic.

something tells me that smolder wants to confuse poor gallus until he is dragging to her and screaming that he loves her, that's cruel, and I LOVE IT ❤❤❤❤❤


Here's the link of the pic on derpi: https://derpibooru.org/images/2343238

And this is apparently the artist's twitter account: https://twitter.com/Burnin_Dove
(It even says Smollus on it's name XD)

P.S. In case he doesn't allow it, please let me know.

what can I say? , IM LOVED ,LOVED, LOVED, LOVED IT!!!!❤❤❤❤❤❤,

as the creator of the smollus group I would like to give you the honor of being the second administrator of the group, you can accept or refuse this honor. ;)

Only way this could be better is if at the end Gallus picked up a tube of his own to mark her back.

My theory, and I have to specify that this is only a theory

Here's an interesting fact, when I took Anthropology as a college course, one of the things they taught me is that a "theory" is defined as an hypothesis that's been proven through rigorous testing. So all of these times I would say "it's just a theory" to dismiss something as not true, only to find out that I've been using the term "theory" the wrong way. So it would probably make more sense if Ocellus said "hypothesis" instead.

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